Yung Diezel - Yonkers 2.0 (Produced by Tyler the Creator/Odd Future)

[YUNG DIEZEL]

had to do a verse on yonkers by tyler the creator.

i remade the beat though wit my own twist on it lol.

lemme know what yall think...............


LimeLinx - Preview - YUNG DIEZEL - YONKERS 2.0 (PRODUCED BY YUNG DIEZEL).mp3

EDIT:
FUCK!!! I UPLOADED THE WRONG VERSION, THIS VERSION CUT OFF THE END,

IM UPLOADING THE FULL VERSION NOW..............


lyrics:


im a walkin fuckin paradox

yes im not

fuck the police,

god bless the cops

im effin hot

on point runnin shit,

fast like a leopard dot

hold on dats suppose to be a cheetah,
fuck it, im boastin when i see ya
fire flow, im roastin when i see ya

been in charge, holdin to the visa


frost.. you lost, flow colder than the keyshia

crack , keys, please.... im posted wit alishia

somebody caught that bullet, i was suppose to be the feature to the clip,
thank god im alive,

im feastin wit ya bitch

these hoes like leeches to the dick.

me im ballin yall in the bleaches wit this shit

you aint even clean put some bleach up on ya shit.

hold on can u clean shit, by puttin bleach up on that shit???/

i dunno , life's an ocean, im reachin for the fish.

gotta eat, tell me whats a preacher to a bitch??

whats a pimp to a nun???

whats a lamp to the sun??

im so cramped i aint even amped when i run....







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[Tha Professor]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - YONKERS 2.0 (Produced by Yung Diezel & Tyler the Creator/Odd Future

Yaw, i think you fucked the beat up to be honest, like i dunno man.. Lyrics spreaded like pussy, "whats a pimp to a nun/ whats a lamp to the sun/ " was pretty nice and funny
Please explain me this line- "fuck the police, god bless the cops" like what are u trying to say exactly cuz i don't get it. i get FUCK THE POLICE, but god bless the cops? you must not be meaning it literally.
The flow starting getting fucked when u started "Feasting with ya bitch" but other than that on point

3/5

[mykill]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - YONKERS 2.0 (Produced by Yung Diezel & Tyler the Creator/Odd Future

hmmm....coat tails?

[Cli-City]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - YONKERS 2.0 (Produced by Yung Diezel & Tyler the Creator/Odd Future

I used to think you were alright........my mind has changed now...

[A$AP YAMS]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - YONKERS 2.0 (Produced by Yung Diezel & Tyler the Creator/Odd Future

Yaw, i think you fucked the beat up to be honest, like i dunno man.. Lyrics spreaded like pussy, "whats a pimp to a nun/ whats a lamp to the sun/ " was pretty nice and funny
Please explain me this line- "fuck the police, god bless the cops" like what are u trying to say exactly cuz i don't get it. i get FUCK THE POLICE, but god bless the cops? you must not be meaning it literally.
The flow starting getting fucked when u started "Feasting with ya bitch" but other than that on point

3/5

He's a walking paradox.. Yes, he's not..

LOL


Good song btw

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - YONKERS 2.0 (Produced by Yung Diezel & Tyler the Creator/Odd Future

He's a walking paradox.. Yes, he's not..

LOL


Good song btw

^^^^^^^^^^

HOLY SHIT, THANK YOU BRO LOL. I posted this in another forum and nobody understood and i was getting frustrated like wtf, this shit is obvious, unless u dont know what paradox means. thanks for pointing that out.

[Jamerson]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - YONKERS 2.0 (Produced by Yung Diezel & Tyler the Creator/Odd Future

Flow - went from a 9 to an 8, 6, 5, what happened? Lol
Lyrics - some hot lines, nice freestyle.
Other - the mastering is garbage? your mastering is usually on point, but in this one your vocals are low and sound weird, and the beat over powers... the lyrics helped at least


ps... i might go over this even tho i could careless abt odd future .

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - YONKERS 2.0 (Produced by Yung Diezel & Tyler the Creator/Odd Future

I used to think you were alright........my mind has changed now...

dont worry bruh lol, this just some shit i felt like experimentin wit , i got more dope shit cummin

---------- Post added at 07:05 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:03 PM ----------

Flow - went from a 9 to an 8, 6, 5, what happened? Lol
Lyrics - some hot lines, nice freestyle.
Other - the mastering is garbage? your mastering is usually on point, but in this one your vocals are low and sound weird, and the beat over powers... the lyrics helped at least


ps... i might go over this even tho i could careless abt odd future .

i thought the flow was decent, i just switched up my rhyme scheme and i guess it sounds off to some of yall.

i thought the shit i was talkin bout was funny and it sounded better wit the offset flow that occured midway through.

after a few listens it actually sounds dope


oh shit , thanks for lettin me know about the mastering...... nobody else be sayin shit.

i thought my mastering wasnt good enough, so i changed my settings, and it came out like this.

but since u said my other songs are better mastered imma use those settings again.

thanks again.

[marcusgettin]

Re: Yung Diezel - Yonkers 2.0 (Produced by Tyler the Creator/Odd Future)

It's OK... nice job man.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - YONKERS 2.0 (Produced by Yung Diezel & Tyler the Creator/Odd Future

hmmm....coat tails?

yep

Coattails allow exposure


pot callin the kettle black, becuz u quick to hop on every new wayne instrumental.


i hardly ever do remixes on other cats beats anymore, so its actually rare for me to coattail on another nigga's beat

---------- Post added at 07:39 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:37 PM ----------

It's OK... nice job man.

thanks for listenin bro lol.

this aint nothing though, u know i got hot shit cummin. fuck this song. just experimentin and shit.

---------- Post added at 08:32 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:39 PM ----------

EDIT:


HERE'S THE INSTRUMENTAL FOR YONKERS 2.0 IF ANYONE WANTS TO SPIT ON IT.

LimeLinx - Preview - YUNG DIEZEL- YONKERS 2.0 INSTRUMENTAL.mp3

[Pestrator]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - YONKERS 2.0 (Produced by Yung Diezel & Tyler the Creator/Odd Future

The flow was good n then went not oso good liek jamerson said also your vocals are low, and I dont really dig what you did to the beat bc i loved the beat as it was, but its an okay song. Leep at it bro

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - YONKERS 2.0 (Produced by Yung Diezel & Tyler the Creator/Odd Future

thanks for the feedback guys