J-Smooth- Hold Your Applause

[JSmooth]

This is the first single off my next mixtape X's & O's. Should be droppin mid june. I would appreciate the feedback on this and my other mixtape "Summer School'n" which is still on the first page. Thanks

LimeLinx - Preview - Hold Your Applause.mp3

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[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: J-Smooth- Hold Your Applause

This another classy type beat , its nice style and it go with your voice.
U sound like u crying in all your songs, even though it get annoying sometimes its good for showing your emotion. This a nice motivational track, and kinda reminds me of some early drake songs.

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Hold Your Applause

haha man i dont wanna change up my voice cuz i might mess up my delivery, but ill def try and tweak it. I do appreciate the feedback though bro. I keep gettin drake and meek mill references ha

[Jamerson]

Re: J-Smooth- Hold Your Applause

i havent really noticed about the voice like lilchuckieforeheadbig said, i kinda notice it here but not in the other songs ive heard from you... it isnt bad tho, it makes u sound different.

Good song kid, and decent hook !

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Hold Your Applause

^^thanks man. i mean its really just each persons interpretation. Ill b improving and droppin some more singles soon

[Fireman007]

Re: J-Smooth- Hold Your Applause

just listened to ur other single off this mixtape and I actually like this one better. It relates to more people. Good shit though bro

[mrr3ye5]

Re: J-Smooth- Hold Your Applause

Lyrics: 4/5 Good lyrics, try an add more complex rhymes and you got the perfect lines
Delivery: 5/5 you got great delivery, perfecto
Flow: 3.5/5 your emotion on this fit, but it felt whiny at some parts, but it worked, just try not to keep it one sided
Overall: try switching up your flow, while your rapping, think of it like singing, yeah, you may not sing, but just change the tone, but i dug this shit

: B-

-LaNNy

[Redd Herring]

Re: J-Smooth- Hold Your Applause

Flow: was Siiiiickk Im not even gonna front you got it down packed and that hook really sets off the whole song
Lyrics: I fuck with the lines mad tough some of them made my jaw straight drop and thats what I look for in songs is shit like that
Other Notes: doesnt sound like your crying to me at all i think its just your passion for what your doin and keep at it
Overall/Rating: 4.5/5

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Hold Your Applause

Thanks for the feedback guys. I check this shit everyday cuz any little bit of advice or feedback helps. If u havent checked out my other stuff on here, please do.

SN: X's and O's Mixtape should b dropping this month