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  • #1

    What A Nigga Be Thinkin

    Ima G So I Dont Shop at Gucci,
    I Fucks With Burlington Coat Factory,
    Grab 2345 White And Black Tees,
    Get The All Black Dickies,
    With The Deep Pockets,
    Momma Always Said The Streets Watching,
    But Things Started Poppin,
    My Niggas Started Droppin,
    Them TBD Boys Dont Play,
    Get Caught With The Whole Thing,
    Tell Me What Can I Say,
    Im Just Blessed To Not Be In A Cage,
    I Like To Just See The Day,
    Life Or Death, Pick The Way,
    Keep The Weight, And Your Tampas Bait,
    Behind The Gate, Nigga Do You Have What It Takes,
    When We Go Down Shut You Mouth,
    They Going Ask Who And How,
    Say I Wasnt In That House,
    And After That Not Another Sound,
    Them Dogs Want You In The Pound,

    this what a nigga be thinkin
    aint it crazy how the fake niggas be hatin,
    shit gets heated, and us flordia niggas be bakin,
    we dont ask for it, we take it,
    and if nigga talk stupid we negate it,
    face it, you ugly and im amazing,
    5 blunt facin, im in the lead, and i aint even really racing,
    big paper chasing, hot like some cajun,
    or tight like some asian,
    im tired of hatin, i take you niggas to satan,
    eat blood, i make you taste it
    steady pacing, cops never tracin,
    my money i be lacin, so im 4 cases,
    tampa baby so im blazin,
    hot down here, cops quick to drop you life around here,
    watch you items cause they will dissapear,
    i keep it real, so i keep it real,
    call me mr. seal a deal,
    get the cash and peal,
    Last edited by FuckTheFeds; 05-23-2011, 11:34 PM.
    Talk Stupid Get Ya Head Popped
    I got that Esther bitch I'm red fox
    Big B's Red Sox I get money to kill time dead clocks
    You fuckin with a nigga who don't give a fuck
    Empty the clip then roll the window up
    Pussy Niggas sweet You niggas cinnabuns
    I'm in a red bitch she say she finna cum
    Two hundred thou on a chain I don't need a piece
    That Banana Clip let Chiquita Speak
    Dark shades EazyE
    Five letter YMCMB
    Bitch Ass Nigga Pussy Ass Nigga
    I see you lookin with your lookin ass nigga


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  • #2
    Re: What A Nigga Be Thinkin

    eh... pretty weak imo... you need to use better vocabulary and make your bars longer....and also try to have some sort of concept and try to write bars that can be visualized.

    check my shit:

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...aving-you.html

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    • #3
      Re: What A Nigga Be Thinkin

      dont come on here talkin that shit, this aint supposed to be the best thing yet..
      this was just a freestyle, i didnt even really try,
      i just went and read you crap, and that shit sucks..
      imo. u cant flow any better then i can,
      Talk Stupid Get Ya Head Popped
      I got that Esther bitch I'm red fox
      Big B's Red Sox I get money to kill time dead clocks
      You fuckin with a nigga who don't give a fuck
      Empty the clip then roll the window up
      Pussy Niggas sweet You niggas cinnabuns
      I'm in a red bitch she say she finna cum
      Two hundred thou on a chain I don't need a piece
      That Banana Clip let Chiquita Speak
      Dark shades EazyE
      Five letter YMCMB
      Bitch Ass Nigga Pussy Ass Nigga
      I see you lookin with your lookin ass nigga


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      • #4
        Re: What A Nigga Be Thinkin

        ^^ Calm down dude. You don't really believe that he tried to make you cry, now do you? We all need some constructive criticism sometimes, so don't act like he's only attacking you. I've been criticized for my shit before, but what did I do? I tried to improve on my weaknesses, and that's how you become the best. Not by whining or crying to your mama, but just by learning from your mistakes and improving.

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        • #5
          Re: What A Nigga Be Thinkin

          I don't think you need to rhyme so much


          i'm in the game they just sell tickets
          man i got old bread like stale biscuits
          ya feelin froggy all you gotta do is yell ribbit
          turn ya ass to a statue like an exhibit
          now lets get it, let me at em
          leave my cage open
          with no pyro i leave the stage smokin
          its weezy f bitch
          the best thing since breath bitch
          S U F F O C A T E

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          • #6
            Re: What A Nigga Be Thinkin

            woah...my bad fuck the feds if i was being mean...my criticism is strictly constructive...when i posted my shit it wasn't supposed to mean :CHECK MINE THIS IS HOW U DO IT.... i meant that i commented yours, now check my stuff out and lemme know what you think....

            also, lets not talk about flow really, it can't be judged too much from written words... but my bars make sense and are clever. don't be a little cry baby dick

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            • #7
              Re: What A Nigga Be Thinkin

              Originally posted by Dukez View Post
              woah...my bad fuck the feds if i was being mean...my criticism is strictly constructive...when i posted my shit it wasn't supposed to mean :CHECK MINE THIS IS HOW U DO IT.... i meant that i commented yours, now check my stuff out and lemme know what you think....

              also, lets not talk about flow really, it can't be judged too much from written words... but my bars make sense and are clever. don't be a little cry baby dick
              Damn you needa calm down. You posted your "freestyle" on this thread. Usually that means you want someones opinion on your work. If all you want is people to tell you how good you are go rap to yo momma. No hate tho.

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              • #8
                Re: What A Nigga Be Thinkin

                first of all i aint no git, so fuck all of yall real talk,
                shit dont even matter to me, just something to do when im on this computer,
                but its good, yall the real rappers..go get some real work and talk to me
                Talk Stupid Get Ya Head Popped
                I got that Esther bitch I'm red fox
                Big B's Red Sox I get money to kill time dead clocks
                You fuckin with a nigga who don't give a fuck
                Empty the clip then roll the window up
                Pussy Niggas sweet You niggas cinnabuns
                I'm in a red bitch she say she finna cum
                Two hundred thou on a chain I don't need a piece
                That Banana Clip let Chiquita Speak
                Dark shades EazyE
                Five letter YMCMB
                Bitch Ass Nigga Pussy Ass Nigga
                I see you lookin with your lookin ass nigga


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                • #9
                  Re: What A Nigga Be Thinkin

                  As i usually see on those forums,lyrics that give no message...why do people always have to say in their lyrics how "great" they are.
                  Also that guy just said his opinion and gave you an advice.. you shouldn't be mad at him for that.

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