C3- Im Coming Home (Pyro, Instinct and Youneek)

[xXPyroXx]

This is a remix of PDiddy and Skylar Grey's song im coming home, hope ye enjoy pls feedback

http://www.youtube.com/user/MrT05akaPYRO?feature=mhee

Feedback :

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...e-goes-on.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...e-you-pay.html

[mykill]

Re: C3- Im Coming Home (Pyro, Instinct and Youneek)

Pyro // Flow: B- // Lyrics: B+
Instinct // Flow: A // Lyrics: B+
Youneek // Flow: B- // Lyrics: B+

Overall: 4.25/5, The effort you guys put in this is A-list. You did a good job putting this one together, and for that I commend you. Instinct holds it down with the hook, and you do a good job about keep on beat and it seems like its mastered well. The biggest hiccup I can hear with this is all of the vocals are mastered really low. Pyro and Youneek - you got that same rushed flow syndrome that plagues a lot of us, especially me. Try to make sure every bar flows smoothly with the beat and dont try to say too much when you only have to say a little. Other than that, nice work fells. Keep doing what you do.

[xXPyroXx]

Re: C3- Im Coming Home (Pyro, Instinct and Youneek)

thanks for the feedback man, ya alot of work went into it so were glad you like it

[mrr3ye5]

Re: C3- Im Coming Home (Pyro, Instinct and Youneek)

PYRO-Flow: B- Lyrics: B :Bomb verses man, only problem was the rushing of fitting some words in
INSTINCT-Flow: B+ Lyrics: A :Great chorus rendition man
Youneek-Flow: C Lyrics: C+ :Your verse felt way to rushed and dry, but keep up the good work

-LaNNy

[indiglo09]

Re: C3- Im Coming Home (Pyro, Instinct and Youneek)

Thanks for the positive responses so far

[MC_Crary]

Re: C3- Im Coming Home (Pyro, Instinct and Youneek)

Pyro your verses was good. Best flow Ive heard from you in your past couple of tracks. You kinda rushed the end of the first verse but thats it. You did that part better on the second verse. Instinct's killing the hooks around Tha Studio. Good to hear more music from You-Neek. Seemed like the mastering was uneven, audio levels need to match better. You-Neek's verse was good, just a little rushed at times. This is a good catchy single track. I'll be waiting for more.

[xXPyroXx]

Re: C3- Im Coming Home (Pyro, Instinct and Youneek)

thanks man i had to change my end of the first verse in the studio so it sounds bad, but fuck it had to be done

[indiglo09]

Re: C3- Im Coming Home (Pyro, Instinct and Youneek)

Nemore responses?