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  • Jay Tunes - Yonkers Freestyle

    Idk man... I got bored. Bash it or like it, I would give this a 1/5 but idc, i had fun and did it all in like an hour... Just something by myself, all i do is feats lol.



    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s5lrnAEYZyk


    Lyrics:
    (Mumbles)
    Im no fucking walking paradox, am I not?
    Healthily spitting sick shit, need a pair of docs
    U hate Odd future? choke on a pair of cocks
    Fucking idiots, swallow up my liquid chalk
    Im ready to take everything, the world is outta stock
    Right now im wondering what the fuck to rap about
    Should I bring this crazy alter ego out?
    Or should I spit some nonsense, somebody help me out
    No no fuck that, I know which take to route
    I mean what route to take, the monster way
    Not coming outta lake, no transvestite singing bad romance
    im talking something you kids are scared of
    I know this is something I shouldn't share tho
    But ive always wanted to fuck with one of satans hoes
    Like Jermaine, but that'll prolly burn my dick off
    Im just kidding I love god, oh my god
    Did you know Im hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobic?
    That means im fucking terrified of those big,
    Fucking words, you good rappers all spit
    I hate you bitches, why do you have to better than me?
    Why cant yall suck like ya once did... ughhh
    Whatever man, Yonkers? I live across the bridge
    Nevermind im still pissed, i cant rap, im about to have a fit
    Im about to smack a bitch, im about to grab her tit
    What am I saying? I think Im better than all of you.

    Fuck odd future, fuck tyler, if your listening youre sexy.
    This was fun, I love yall!


    btw the cover is horrible in purpose .

    FEEDBACK :
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...dd-future.html
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...feat-deon.html
    Last edited by Jamerson; 05-21-2011, 12:45 PM.

  • #2
    Re: Jay Tunes - Yonkers Freestyle

    wtf, u copycat.



    edit: just listend to this, and i like it better than all your other songs/features, no joke.


    flow: 5/5 nicest i heard from u.

    lyrics: 5/5 best lyrics u had.

    overall 10/5, your best work bro, i loved it. keep this up, i might wanna collab.
    Last edited by YUNG DIEZEL; 05-21-2011, 10:22 PM.
    EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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    • #3
      Re: Jay Tunes - Yonkers Freestyle

      Damn man, I gotta agree with Diezel. This is some of your best your work. The flow was totally unique to everything else you've done. And the rhyme scheme was sickening. Sucks everybody slept on this. Keep the bars coming man.

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