Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

[Artille]

Here's my first full solo track which was produced by YoungO and the vocals were mastered by Noble. Looking for both negative and positive feedback. I hope you enjoy the track, you can download it below:

Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

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[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

Flow - Was really smooth. Slipped a few times it seemed. Liked it though. Was hard to understand words a few times.
Lyrics - Some really nice multies and wordplay. Love the realness you spit.
Other - Nice beat. And nice to see you rapping again now. Hopefully you keep steady with it. Expecting some consistency in dropping songs.
Overall - 4/5. Keep it up.

[ThaMothafuckinCarter]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

damn pretty good actually. your flow is really good

[IceMan]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

Never posted in Tha Studio but this is really dope
I fux with your flow/wordplay & that mellow beat

[Artille]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

Thank you all for the feedback and thanks for checking out the track.

[Wisheezy]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

Artillery goin' in. Nice work

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

could've been mastered better, whoever did it?? i hope u didnt pay for it.

smooth beat.

lol @ 2:34 sounded like u did a cut in, and ya voice got more aggressive.



lyrics: 4.5/5 - good topics

flow: 4/5 - decent, was nice and steady

overall: 4.25/5 - not bad, just tighten on the mastering, and keep it up, nice emotional track her.

[mrr3ye5]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

Flow: It fit most of the time, couple times you fall off, but its all good
Lyrics: Great, no critic on this
Other: Add more feeling, cuz your lyrics were really strong, just lacking feeling
Overall: 4.0/5
Keep'em coming

-LaNNy

[ProBitaz.]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

I fuckin' love ya swag when ya rap bro.

Great song, beat is great and flow is 4/5..

Keep makin' songs, I enjoy em.

[Pestrator]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

this is pretty good bro, i relly like ur swag on this its soo laid back n it just sounds real smooth, lyrics were pretty good. I agree with diezel bout thecut in part, its really noticable not really smooth. Mastering wasnt bad, it just sounded liek it needed to be smoothed over a lil more. Overall good song bro, keep posting!

[JSmooth]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

flow- 3.5/5 it was good throughout the song but i didnt feel any emotion from you
lyrics- 4/5 Good shit. More emotion makes those lyrics even better
overall- 4/5 keep it up

[Artille]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

lol @ 2:34 sounded like u did a cut in, and ya voice got more aggressive.

Yeah I was going for more aggression, but it didn't come out as smooth as I wanted it to. Thanks for the detailed feedback.

I fuckin' love ya swag when ya rap bro.

Great song, beat is great and flow is 4/5..

Keep makin' songs, I enjoy em.

Glad you enjoy it, more coming soon. Thanks for checking it out.

this is pretty good bro, i relly like ur swag on this its soo laid back n it just sounds real smooth, lyrics were pretty good. I agree with diezel bout thecut in part, its really noticable not really smooth. Mastering wasnt bad, it just sounded liek it needed to be smoothed over a lil more. Overall good song bro, keep posting!

Thanks man, yeah I still need to get better at recording and I know nothing about mastering. So that's why I had THP do it for me. Idk, I just need to sit down and learn some new shit. Maybe there are some nice tutorials?

Thanks to everyone else who commented and gave feedback. I really appreciate it, expect more coming soon.