Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

[Sentus]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

Turn your vocals down. They don't blend in with the beat at all and they just sound awkward. Your flow is good, your delivery is alright. You can't really help it I just don't like your voice much. You sound like Ezra. Your lyrics were alright, not really my style. Try throwin in some more multis.

Pretty good track though

[JSFG]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

Real dope shit.

[P.K.U. Beats]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

nice track man
i like the beat, very smooth, your flow is straight but i think it needs a lil bit more variation

[MC_Crary]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

This shit is gangsta man. Feelin' the flow, and the switch ups in it. Actually agree with Diezel, the track that you mixed sounded better than this one. Your delivery on this one is sick. Your lyrics feel like they're straight from the heart, I feel you man. Another good track. Even better for your first solo track. Your flow on the last verse is great, but has a few slip ups. This is what hip-hop's about man. It's like a journal to your life. Keep up the great work bro.

[Coleon]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

Signed back on here just to feed you.

Good voice and pronunciation but the emotionless delivery holds it back. Put your personality in your voice, make it theatric. Flow is on point minus a few rushes to fit a line. Lyrics are good but your flow would improve 2x if you incorporated a few larger multies into your schemes so it sounds more technical in places. This is a GREAT start but it is a START, I'll be looking forward to more from you.

[Redd Herring]

Re: Artille - Road of Faith (Produced by YoungO)

Flow: on POINT
Lyrics: I like the intensity of your lyrics, makes it easy to visualize what your talkin about
Other Notes: Ill be honest and say this aint my style but you pulled it off really well and made it enjoyable
Overall/Rating: 4/5