The Resistance - Yung Cash

[ATLien666]

Ehh, kinda changed it up.

YouTube - ‪The Resistance - Yung Cash & Drake.‬‏

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[Sentus]

Re: The Resistance - Yung Cash

I hate this style but fuck it, I'll feed it anyway

From what I remember, you actually sound a lot better. You have a pretty clear delivery, it sounds monotone but that's good cause it goes with the beat. Lyrics were alright, the rhyming was better than I expected. Glad to see you improving.

[Artille]

Re: The Resistance - Yung Cash

Nice remix man, I actually liked it.

Flow: Steady and chill and stayed the same throughout the song. Sometimes it was weird, but it all came together nicely in the end.
Lyrics: Meaningful, on topic, on point. Really enjoyed these more than anything, keep up the good work. Especially loved the start of the second verse.
Other: I think your voice and tone on this track fit it very well. Nice work.
Overall: 4/5

[ATLien666]

Re: The Resistance - Yung Cash

I hate this style but fuck it, I'll feed it anyway

From what I remember, you actually sound a lot better. You have a pretty clear delivery, it sounds monotone but that's good cause it goes with the beat. Lyrics were alright, the rhyming was better than I expected. Glad to see you improving.

Thanks, and I'mma try to switch up the delivery in different songs.

Nice remix man, I actually liked it.

Flow: Steady and chill and stayed the same throughout the song. Sometimes it was weird, but it all came together nicely in the end.
Lyrics: Meaningful, on topic, on point. Really enjoyed these more than anything, keep up the good work. Especially loved the start of the second verse.
Other: I think your voice and tone on this track fit it very well. Nice work.
Overall: 4/5

and thanks! I'm definitely try to keep improving on my flow.

[MC_Crary]

Re: The Resistance - Yung Cash

This song fits your flow perfectly man. It's more of a spoken word type deal, that's the way I always felt your music should've been. This is your niche man. A+ on the lyrics. This is the first song by you that I've checked in awhile, but you've definitely improved. I love it man. I wish you drop a tape lol. You've been around since before me lol.

[ATLien666]

Re: The Resistance - Yung Cash

This song fits your flow perfectly man. It's more of a spoken word type deal, that's the way I always felt your music should've been. This is your niche man. A+ on the lyrics. This is the first song by you that I've checked in awhile, but you've definitely improved. I love it man. I wish you drop a tape lol. You've been around since before me lol.

Right on, and yeah, my flow is something I still need work on, but I'm glad you're seeing improvement! and I'm hoping to drop a tape before school summer starts.

[mrr3ye5]

Re: The Resistance - Yung Cash

Lyrics: 4/5 I felt every word of it, lyrics were good
Delivery: 3/5 you fall off like every other line, but i can hear what you were getting too
Adaptation: 4/5 cuz i know how you wanted to approach this song, if you spent more time fitting your words in
Overall: dope shit : C