LaNNy - Chinese Torture (Instrumental)

[mrr3ye5]

this is a beat I produced, beat name "Chinese torture" for now, i wanted to get some insight from you guys, tell me if you like it, what i need to change, anything, it is still incomplete, but this is the main body of the beat.
this beat will be featured on my mixtape/ or album Ep, that is currently in its beginning stages

Peep it, please critic

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-LaNNy

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[mrr3ye5]

Re: LaNNy - Chinese Torture (Instrumental)

?? ?? anyone?

[Pestrator]

Re: LaNNy - Chinese Torture (Instrumental)

So far soo good in my opinion, I would say to change up the drum pattern kinda like how the drums go in A mMilli or songs liek that to keep the beat interesting, the bass at the end kinda sounded like it didnt fit in compleatly so I think you should find a diff bass. Also maybe adding some percussion could add more flavor to the beat.

[pgathriller]

Re: LaNNy - Chinese Torture (Instrumental)

the beat is dope, the asian vibe works nicely with it - - not really diggin the distortion effect on the kick (i think it's effect but the kick might actually be red-lining), gives the track a gritty vibe but I think it would serve better as a nice rounded kick rather than the hardstyle distortion kick; just a preference of my own though. overall it's dope though, great track for someone to just rip through, nothing really bad to critic other than tonality choices I would have made different like the kick selection. keep it up man, nice work