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  • Playground Prodigies-Return of Simba (Over J.Cole's Beat)

    LimeLinx - Preview - Return of Simba.mp3

    Rapped over J.Cole's-Return of Simba

    Intro:
    Trynta make it big, but I'm still me
    Oh what you don't think I'm ready for it
    Ya girl up on me like she feel me
    and all she does is tell me that she ready for it
    you only get one shot so stay shinin'
    Put heart & soul so I stay grindin'
    Just a youngin' goin' burst on the scene
    tell Lebron it's return of the king

    Verse:
    Just a youngin' trynta make it on the scene so early
    Kentucky 'till I die, but I still flip birdies
    No Louisville, but I'm still ill surely
    Ralph Lauren on my chest, I rep Kentucky Derby
    for a livin', the liquor keep me grinnin'
    so check the scoreboard cause I'm Charlie Sheen winnin'
    in the 9th innin'
    From the beginning, I'm hittin' it out the buildin'
    & the rappers tryta get in, slim pickins', so keep spittin'
    I keep rippin' & killin' for all these beats
    stayin' hungry so I gotta eat, No beef
    Killin' tracks like its dead heat, makin' ends meet
    lovin' beats the Alternative Black guy'll send me
    its recommended that you quit cause I'm just startin'
    you other rappers might be hungry but I stay starvin'
    Electrifyin' the game like I stay chargin'
    Stayin' up, you rappers stay fallin'
    I stay ballin' like its Spaulding or Doctor J
    or Dwayne Wade & the other two just south of Tampa Bay
    I'm tryta be a legened, workin' hard cause I'm sweatin'
    bettin' this is over, but you wrong it's never endin'
    This ain't a diss song, I ain't tryta battle yo
    I'mma beast, Imma motha fuckin' animal
    flammable eatin' other rappers like a Cannibal,
    protect me city like the Alamo
    People wonder if I'm ever gonna stop, no props
    from my pops, till I make it to the top,
    for the number one spot, reachin' for the top slot
    Bitch I'm always stayin' hotter than hot, no long shot
    man, I'm badder than the Taliban I keep burnin'
    Release a song makin' everybody's heads turnin'
    sayin' who is he, Breezy & I'm still learnin'
    but please keep concernin'
    Some day I'm goin be earnin' bout 6 or 7 figures
    & the kicker is that liquor only make my rhymes sicker,
    Fuck gold diggers, I'm goin keep my wallet thicka
    give the finger to the haters stayin' bitter, no filter
    I'm burnin up a hundred forty five degrees
    blowin' trees, like a breeze, I'm sicka than a disease,
    countin' cheese, bitch please, flow colder than Mr. Freeze
    & yo girl my main squeeze, so god bless you,
    He blessed me with a talent to rhyme,
    so everytime I rhyme this good, should be a fuckin' crime
    the lights mine, & I ain't even in my prime
    I keep shine, so other rappers stop tryin'
    It's on me, expectin' nobody to own me
    my homies comin' with me so I'm never lonely
    I'm the only mothafucka from my city that'll do it
    retarded flow, matter fact I'm gettin stupid
    music in my veins, expectin' people to lose it
    so high like I'm alley oopin', I'm just a student
    of the game, & I ain't worried bout the lames who tryta do it
    Bitch I ain't stupid cause
    I got the hardest flow
    No pardons tho
    fuck all the retarded hoes
    if this a battle I'm gearin' up for war like a Spartan yo
    But I gotta go, leave you with a starrish flow
    boy to a man but my car still ridin' slow
    But I don't do shit
    I wanna be the name that people never forget
    its funny when a woman keep a man so whipped
    I won't ever be a pussy ass bitch, so don't forget


    Thank you for any feedback!!!!


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    Last edited by stillfli69; 05-29-2011, 04:33 AM.

  • #2
    Re: Playground Prodigies-Return of Simba (Over J.Cole's Beat)

    Flow: Mac Miller
    Lyrics: B-

    Overall: 3/5, Hmm... I think every rapper has spit that "Charlie Sheen Winning" line. Even I did it. Starting to get old. Delivery and flow were good. You sound very similar to someone... I think you might wanna try to differentiate a bit. Multis in some areas were good, but a lot of elementary rhymes so you might want to diversify your vocabulary and try to use different words that draw a more vivid picture.

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    • #3
      Re: Playground Prodigies-Return of Simba (Over J.Cole's Beat)

      appreciate the feedback homie!

      ---------- Post added at 09:19 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:22 PM ----------

      Any other feedback is MUCH appreciated

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      • #4
        Re: Playground Prodigies-Return of Simba (Over J.Cole's Beat)

        I dig this song bro u did a good job on this bro. Ur flowed fit nicely on this one, ur lyriics were decent too keep it up. I just listened the original n J cole went soo hard good job on the beat too, where did u get the beat?

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        • #5
          Re: Playground Prodigies-Return of Simba (Over J.Cole's Beat)

          thanks man I really apprciate it, I got the beat from youtube lol

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