flow

[biggie>wayne]

my flow is spectular.
i am monster i make u bleed like drakula
i am a giant like the locness monster and u are so small like a hamster.
and i am the snake and u are breakfast and ate.
me and ur girl got this fetish.
to make her suck my cock till i am impressed with it.
i never make her stop till i strike her with my dots.
pop her cherry like icream dairy.
make her scream till that pussy start to steam.
and then i take it out of one hole and put it in another.
i swear this is like golf and i put the ball on her tee.
u are just small bees and i am the real sting.
like a king
i rep everything.
i reck every girl.
i tap every ass that steps to the plate.
i eat that pussy like it was bait.
she stick to my cock like it was duck tape.
this flow is done and if u dont like it i really dont give a fuck

[Young Luc]

Re: flow

nice

[trillphill]

Re: flow

im being honest with you, and understand by your last line "this flow is done and if u dont like it i really dont give a fuck". but a good portion of it didnt rhyme, the flow was hard to follow.
next time try to write it so it's easier to read and understand where/what are your bars. and i found your style to be like wayne's xD nice go though on it

[biggie>wayne]

Re: flow

thanks i know i aint the best but at least i try to flow

[trillphill]

Re: flow

thanks i know i aint the best but at least i try to flow

this is a late response, but yea, props for goin and gettin yours it's all good practice makes as close to perfect as possible