Coleon - Light Era Contest

[Coleon]

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[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Coleon - Light Era Contest

you kinda remind me of az , prolly the voice or sumthin in this song YouTube - ‪Nas - Life's a Bitch Ft. Az‬‏ (first verse)

[Coleon]

Re: Coleon - Light Era Contest

Post a link like I've never heard AZ -__- and it's because my voice hasn't matured fully yet lol.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Coleon - Light Era Contest

how old are you?? AZ was prolly like 19 or 20 when he did that song.

[Coleon]

Re: Coleon - Light Era Contest

I turned 17 in February.
Download Can't Sleep - My Verse.mp3 - Supashare.net
That is way better than this verse ^

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Coleon - Light Era Contest

I turned 17 in February.
Download Can't Sleep - My Verse.mp3 - Supashare.net
That is way better than this verse ^

nice emotion, but its more squeaky in that song lol.

[Coleon]

Re: Coleon - Light Era Contest

Yeah I don't try to put on heirs in my music. I give no fucks if anyone else likes it. Some day my voice will be acceptable and I'll be inexplicably dope, until then I'll go with the squeaks.

Best AZ track

[MC_Crary]

Re: Coleon - Light Era Contest

I'm guessing this was for some kind of contest or something where the topic was light. You attacked the concept with perfection. The vocabulary alone s in a realm where most niggas ain't touchin. The continuous multi's help with the flow. I don't know if this is possible but it's almost to the point where you put too much emotion into the song. It's like you trying to make it sound like you were gong hard. Didn't work to your favor on this one. In the lyrics department I would give ths a 5 all day, but I feel like your delivery of the rhymes could've been much better. The peaking in your mic isn't as noticeable as you thought. The creator of the music always notices more flaws than the listener though. Good track man.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Coleon - Light Era Contest

i like the squeaks bro, i never said it was bad.

its unique.

[Coleon]

Re: Coleon - Light Era Contest

I'm guessing this was for some kind of contest or something where the topic was light. You attacked the concept with perfection. The vocabulary alone s in a realm where most niggas ain't touchin. The continuous multi's help with the flow. I don't know if this is possible but it's almost to the point where you put too much emotion into the song. It's like you trying to make it sound like you were gong hard. Didn't work to your favor on this one. In the lyrics department I would give ths a 5 all day, but I feel like your delivery of the rhymes could've been much better. The peaking in your mic isn't as noticeable as you thought. The creator of the music always notices more flaws than the listener though. Good track man.

I wanted it to sound more like a speech with the music just a back drop but a lot of people feel the same way as you. Thanks for peeping it man.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Coleon - Light Era Contest

Thinking of it that way, I totally get why you flowed like that now. Nice.

[Sentus]

Re: Coleon - Light Era Contest

This was dope man, you already know what I think.


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