Pyro- Back To The Basics

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[DP_onda_BEatz]

Re: Pyro- Back To The Basics

I'm a fan of that fast flow
good job on this beat
ryhme scheme kinda mess up ur flow a little
lyrics you stuck to the subject

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro- Back To The Basics

I'm a fan of that fast flow
good job on this beat
ryhme scheme kinda mess up ur flow a little
lyrics you stuck to the subject

thanks man bu wat du mean by the ryhming scheme messed up the flow, du think the flow is bad

[WeeZy iZ RaaaW]

Re: Pyro- Back To The Basics

class man love the speed, lyrics: 4/5 -on point, flow: 3.5/5 - pretty good, it lacks clarity at times hard to comprehend wat u mean, overall 4/5 keep it up!

[Remy Represent]

Re: Pyro- Back To The Basics

I like it, your flow fits the beat. use more clarity and pronouce your words more clearly. Lyrics.. 4/5. Flow.. 3.5/5. deep shit man, use a harder rhyme scheme and get more clarity and you'd be the shit. dope in all, and i think you did a great job.

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro- Back To The Basics

I like it, your flow fits the beat. use more clarity and pronouce your words more clearly. Lyrics.. 4/5. Flow.. 3.5/5. deep shit man, use a harder rhyme scheme and get more clarity and you'd be the shit. dope in all, and i think you did a great job.

Thanks man i appreciate the feedback

[kxsh]

Re: Pyro- Back To The Basics

I like this track! Your lyrics are pretty hard the delivery/ clarity is a little muffled.. and your hook is too loud or verses not loud enough? Overall your lyrics shine through i just wish they would be more clear and loud my dude!!

[mykill]

Re: Pyro- Back To The Basics

Flow: B
Lyrics: A-

Overall: 3.5/5, Flow on this one was pretty durn good. You did a nice job with it. I like the speed. The ferocity of it is pretty on par as well. The differing volumes on the mastering though take away from the overall quality of the production. If that "back to the basics" part is the hook/chorus, then you need to master it a little different than the verses or else it all just runs together. Maybe do a doubler then give it some nice reverb to boot. Something like that. Great job!

[Coleon]

Re: Pyro- Back To The Basics

Good artwork. I hate this beat tbh but your flow is good, kind of an unusual approach to it but I like it. Your lyrics are good and you switch your flow up often enough to not make it stale. Sometimes you'd rush the end of a line and cut it short to start the next but it wasn't too noticeable. The levels on your vocals went from perfect to loud to low. You put a lot of energy into it and you kept it up all the way through. I thought the chorus didn't stick out at all from the rest and that was the biggest flaw. Keep it up.

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro- Back To The Basics

thanks guys im ordering a new mic so ill redo the song when i grt it, fixing the sound levels and the overall quality