Artille - King (Produced by K Beatz)

[Artille]

Here is a new "banger" style track I created over a nice K Beatz produced track called "King". I wasn't necessarily going for great lyrics on this one. The mixing, mastering, and all other editing was done by myself. Please check out the track below and leave some constructive feedback, thanks.

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Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post506644
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post499915

[Wisheezy]

Re: Artille - King (Produced by K Beatz)

Flow is pretty sick
Chorus is nice
Lyrics are nice too
Beat is raw

Only thing is that mastering but I know you're learning fast with that one. Keep it up

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Artille - King (Produced by K Beatz)

I generally like your work Artille, but lyrically you weren't at your best here, it was cliche-central haha

Flow was good though, on point as usual of course, could have sped up at points, but Mr Consistent as usual.

Hook was a slight twist on the usual cliche, lyric wise, liked that, the melody not so much, but that's due to the restricting beat. It was Lex Lugery but without the bang his beats usually have.

I like how your switching it up style wise a bit, but to me this wasn't up to your usual standards, which in a way is a good thing since you ain't been going long but you already set the bar at a good height.

2.5/5 for the track, but regardless I'm anticipating your next cut.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Artille - King (Produced by K Beatz)

Flow - Liked it. More emotion at points was good, than you swayed away from that and it sounded boring.
Lyrics - Some of the lyrics are the best I heard from you.
Other - Keep working on the mastering and mixing bro.
Overall - 4/5.

[DP_onda_BEatz]

Re: Artille - King (Produced by K Beatz)

Work on mixing the vocals i hear some distortions...

Flow kool
got that big sean mase tone
chorus nothing really catchy
lyrics was average but would like to hear more why ur a king and not how your killing someone...

[mykill]

Re: Artille - King (Produced by K Beatz)

Flow: B+
Lyrics: B

Overall: 3.5/5, There needs to be an intro. Kinda boring listening to the instrumental in the beginning. You might wanna go back and put more feeling into the hook (a la Weezy aggression style). If I would add to it, I'd do another take that's phased back and forth to L and R of the speakers. As far as mastering side, you might wanna check your vocal volume level. The effects sound good, just sounds louder than the beat, and drowns it out. Ad-libs might make the verses and hook a bit more impac, but I dont condone the use of WakaFlakaisms. Fix up those few things you got yourself a damn good track.

[Artille]

Re: Artille - King (Produced by K Beatz)

Flow: B+
Lyrics: B

Overall: 3.5/5, There needs to be an intro. Kinda boring listening to the instrumental in the beginning. You might wanna go back and put more feeling into the hook (a la Weezy aggression style). If I would add to it, I'd do another take that's phased back and forth to L and R of the speakers. As far as mastering side, you might wanna check your vocal volume level. The effects sound good, just sounds louder than the beat, and drowns it out. Ad-libs might make the verses and hook a bit more impac, but I dont condone the use of WakaFlakaisms. Fix up those few things you got yourself a damn good track.

Wow, thanks a lot. This is the type of feedback I look for most.

[Tha Professor]

Re: Artille - King (Produced by K Beatz)

I liked the hard talking lyrics in the beginning of the first verse, but then u cooled down towards the end of that verse. The mastering sounds like it could be a lil smoother, but just a lil. do some backing vocals to emphasize some parts would be nice.
Overall: 3.25/5

[Iamhiph0p]

Re: Artille - King (Produced by K Beatz)

Flow: It's a little bit up and down but great work
Lyrics: Getting better!
Other: Keep practicing on mixing vocals
Overall: 3/5

[MC_Crary]

Re: Artille - King (Produced by K Beatz)

I don't know why but you mastering sounds sub par on this one. The vocals sound a little muddy. You're last track was mastered pretty well. I'm talking the one you mastered not the one Noble mastered. Your flow is great on this though. The switch up's are really good. You showcased your best quality on this one. Loved the Tech N9ne line. The lyrics were good, and helped you just ride the beat all way through. The hook is really good too. If the mastering was a little better this would be a 5 out 5.

[Darkdevilr]

Re: Artille - King (Produced by K Beatz)

Mastering: I dont know what is ( yet) , but everything sounded nice to me.
Chorus : Wasnt feeling the Chorus , sounded monotone.
Flow: Is sick throughout most of the track!

CONS~
- The intro is really long and nothing happens.