I'm On One (Drake Z-Mix) - Ziggy Blockley

[Z!Greatest]

Hey, I'm guessing you've all heard the Drizzy/Rozay/Weezy original (Khaled lol), so here's a verse I did on 40's crazy smooth beat, with a re-sung hook and a bit of clowning on the tail end.

Hope you enjoy, I'm not pretending it's up to the candle of the original but I enjoyed going over this beat so much that I felt like doing it proper and posting it up. Cheers yall, link is below, feed is below that and lyrics below below that haha

Zig


Link-

YouTube - ‪I'm On One (Drake Z-Mix) - Ziggy Blockley (Produced by "40")‬‏


Feed-



http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...b-im-back.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...y-k-beatz.html

Lyrics-


Fuck yall who sayin minus autotune I cant sing
Turn em off, I hit those notes, its for effect, Im the new king
But I got no bling, who needs it, cause my words they plant the seeds it
Doesn’t matter what your wearing cause if you get shot you'll bleed its
Stone cold fact, and like Fat Joe I’m gonna crack soon
Im sitting upriver, but not mainstream like New Moon
City kid, no silver spoon,
Aint Frank Sinatra, but hand me a mic and you know that I will croon
For your amusement, whether laughing at or singing with me
At least I have a purpose, unlike those who threatening me
Aint intimidated, cause like Kevin R “I Made It”
Because face to face you’ll look away, don’t pretend that you'll say it
Uh, like an MMO, I'm straight up on my grind
Magic Mint Original, got so much stored inside
But why should I go hard, on a stupid little freestyle
Stored my best shit for my album, I'm so far above the teen style

[mykill]

Re: I'm On One (Drake Z-Mix) - Ziggy Blockley

u got a link to download this?

[mrr3ye5]

Re: I'm On One (Drake Z-Mix) - Ziggy Blockley

Lyrics: 4/5 bomb shit bro,. just missing something to me, can't point it out tho
Flow: 3.5/5 your flow was iffy in the beginning,... then it caught on, your voice sounded really HIGH haha
Other: great job was feeling it, just the flow needs to be redone
B+

-LaNNy

[HHMAYHEM]

Re: I'm On One (Drake Z-Mix) - Ziggy Blockley

" like Fat Joe I’m gonna crack soon" "Im sitting upriver, but not mainstream like New Moon"
Not feeling the "like an MMO" line. good verse / flow. Vocals need to be polished IDK if its the mic or not. Metas are there. Overall I'm feeling the freestyle.