Dough To Blow

[Coleon]

My 11 year old brother rapping with a friend. I fed Artille's King (ask him).

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Dough To Blow

Their voices deeper than yours.

how old are they??

[ATLien666]

Re: Dough To Blow

Their voices deeper than yours.

how old are they??

lmao.

[Coleon]

Re: Dough To Blow

Their voices deeper than yours.

how old are they??

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There's me doing the verses they wrote^

He's 11, his friend is 12. I'm sure they'd ghostwrite for you if you want to step your pen game up.

[mykill]

Re: Dough To Blow

im surprised no one noticed the blatant "jab" towards the forum in this one

[Coleon]

Re: Dough To Blow

im surprised no one noticed the blatant "jab" towards the forum in this one

Lmao I'd love to own up to a jab but I'd be lying.
They wrote these lyrics themselves and chose this beat lol.
I just recorded it to help them with flow, rest was all them haha.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Dough To Blow

Download Dough To Blow.mp3 - Supashare.net
There's me doing the verses they wrote^

lol, u just proved my point.

like i said, their voices deeper.

especially the second kid, his voice really put yours to shame lol .

im sorry that u're so insecure to the point u had to record and try to prove your voice wasnt manlier than your 11 year old little brother who is 7 years younger than you.

hey it happens bro, everybody voice not deep, its not big of a deal.

since u posted, might as well drop feed for everyone.

colean:

flow - 3.5/5 : decent, could been a little more on point based on other joints i heard from u

lyrics - swag,

but not your lyrics, so n/a

overall 3.75/5, JUST work on your flow and swag.

My 11 year old brother rapping with a friend. I fed Artille's King (ask him).

both of these guys swagged the fucck out of their verses equally.

lyrics: swag/swag

flow: swag/swag

overall: 100/5, they demolished the verses, and swagged me the fucck out.
THEY CAN EASILY BE THE NEXT MAC MILLERS ALREADY AT THEIR CURRENT AGES.
IM SORRY TO SAY....
NOT ONLY ARE THEIR VOICES MANLIER , AND THEY'RE 8 YEARS YOUNGER THAN YOU,\
THEY ALSO SWAGGED THE VERSES OUT SWAGGIER THAN YOU WIT BETTER FLOW AS WELL.

ALWAYS REMEMBER,>>>> SWAG IS 70 %, LYRICS ARE 30%,

THATS HOW SOULJABOY, LIL B, ETC.... MANAGE TO STAY RELEVANT.

#SWAGG

He's 11, his friend is 12. I'm sure they'd ghostwrite for you if you want to step your pen game up.

LOOKS LIKE YOU SHOULD TAKE YOUR OWN ADVICE MY FRIEND

GOOD DAY!!

SWAGG# SWAGG#

[Coleon]

Re: Dough To Blow

Lol I recorded that so they'd know how to flow it over a beat.
If you ever need someone to belittle you on a feature just PM me.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Dough To Blow

Lol I recorded that so they'd know how to flow it over a beat.
If you ever need someone to belittle you on a feature just PM me.

as the late great waka flocka once said "o lets do it"

i'll pm u a song,

when can u have it recorded?

[Coleon]

Re: Dough To Blow

I won't be on a collab spree till after me and Sentus get our tape out. You can go ahead and send me something and I could write to it ASAP.