Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

[Artille]

Here’s an experimental love song I recorded.It has a very mellow feeling to it, with an emotional chorus and a smooth rap verse. The track was produced by Artixx. I’m aware this is much different than anything else I have dropped. I am in no way a singer, just trying to be an all around artist. Check it out and throw me some feedback, thanks.

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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/t29244/
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/t28439/#post526138

[WeezYIsCraaazY]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

Feedback:

Beat: Fucking Dope; Sounds Like A Very Good Producer.
Voice: It Sounded Very Good, It Worked Well.
Lyrics: Very On Point. Liking Them
Flow: Fitted Very Well Too.

Sounded Very Good, Considering The Fact That You're New(ish) To This Kind Of Music.

4/5.

[mykill]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

Flow: B-
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4.25/5, As always, lyrics here are on point. I like the vibe of this track. Very lax and chill, and that makes the overall delivery good. But like I've said before, you gotta step up your delivery man. Put more feeling into everything you spit. You got it in some points, but sometimes it goes by the wayside and hurts the overall draw of the track. But that aside, you got the f'n bars to kill a majority of the people around you, so dont worry about lyrical content. I think you have a real knack for that. Get that delivery on point, and i couldnt help but say you need to "go pro". Great track. Can't wait for the whole tape you're working on to come out and even through this an experimental type thing, I hope you put it on there. Great track to add to a tape, and another classic for your overall catalog. Cheers

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

chill ass beat.

decent singing.
put some more emotion in dat and it'll be nice.
right now its kinda monotone.
lol @ :51/:52 seconds it u kinda messed up, i dunno if u noticed or not. sometimes when i fuck up like dat i leave it, but it sounded like u mumbled the word. "cuz moneys not an issue ..dsoidjjfj..... im with you"
did u use autotune???



flow/lyrics - 4/5 - nice

overall - more emotion would make this song doper.

what do u use to record??? mic/programs/etc.....

[Artille]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

chill ass beat.

decent singing.
put some more emotion in dat and it'll be nice.
right now its kinda monotone.
lol @ :51/:52 seconds it u kinda messed up, i dunno if u noticed or not. sometimes when i fuck up like dat i leave it, but it sounded like u mumbled the word. "cuz moneys not an issue ..dsoidjjfj..... im with you"
did u use autotune???



flow/lyrics - 4/5 - nice

overall - more emotion would make this song doper.

what do u use to record??? mic/programs/etc.....

No autotune on this, I'll probably never use it.

"Money's not an issue, as long as I'm with you"
I kinda noticed it wasn't completely understandable, but I could understand it. Probably because I wrote it. lol

I think I just got stuck in the same tune from the first line on my first verse. I'll be sure to add more emotion next time around.

Thanks for the feed, I'm gonna go check out your song now.

[Eazy_F_Baby]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

dope as track i like it. uhh
Beat - A+
Flow - B
Lyrics is on point

[MC_Crary]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

I love where you went with this song man. It seems like this is straight from the heart man, you have a knack for putting your heart into your music. That's the most important part of music. Hip-hop, r&b, any genre. Whatever you do it has to come from the deepest, most honest place you have.The lyrics were directly from the way you felt. As basic at it seems, explaining your thoughts and making it rhyme and satisfying the most technical lyric critics is a great accomplishment. The flow could be better but still hits. I love this song.

[Artille]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

I love where you went with this song man. It seems like this is straight from the heart man, you have a knack for putting your heart into your music. That's the most important part of music. Hip-hop, r&b, any genre. Whatever you do it has to come from the deepest, most honest place you have.The lyrics were directly from the way you felt. As basic at it seems, explaining your thoughts and making it rhyme and satisfying the most technical lyric critics is a great accomplishment. The flow could be better but still hits. I love this song.

Thanks for the detailed feedback man. I'm glad you genuinely enjoyed it.

Flow: B-
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4.25/5, As always, lyrics here are on point. I like the vibe of this track. Very lax and chill, and that makes the overall delivery good. But like I've said before, you gotta step up your delivery man. Put more feeling into everything you spit. You got it in some points, but sometimes it goes by the wayside and hurts the overall draw of the track. But that aside, you got the f'n bars to kill a majority of the people around you, so dont worry about lyrical content. I think you have a real knack for that. Get that delivery on point, and i couldnt help but say you need to "go pro". Great track. Can't wait for the whole tape you're working on to come out and even through this an experimental type thing, I hope you put it on there. Great track to add to a tape, and another classic for your overall catalog. Cheers

Amazing feedback man. I'll definitely be dropping a mixtape at some point, but I wanna make sure I do it right and that I'm truly ready to drop some more serious shit. When I feel the time is right, I will hit up a professional studio to do a mixtape. Thanks again man, feedback like this really motivates me!

[Pestrator]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

i like this track is diff, the singing is decent, good job on experimenting. The rapping on it is on point, i love the hook. The only thing u need to work on is ur delivery but overall its a sick track.

[indiglo09]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

Cool concept man, but it feels like u weren't committed 2 the singing and it ends up sounding monotone, really prefer the verse compared 2 the hook

[ProBitaz.]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

Beat is so chill!

I think ya should get yourself more into the song/music tho. It's like ya hold back tbh...

Apart from that this is pretty dope.

[Gibbsy]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

i always try give some proper feed, so ill start off with the beat!! sick choice man very chilled vibe on this feels laid back,
the hook hmmm.. tbh i ent feelin it would be much better with a singer on it but syaing that i cant sing either man so no hate for that,
i think if you proper pushed the vocals out the sound of the singing would be alot better, the verse is sick though flow is on point and very chilled so im feelin that lyrics are tight too gunna say 4/5 but based on the hook it took alot from how the track coulda sounded!