Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

[Artille]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

i always try give some proper feed, so ill start off with the beat!! sick choice man very chilled vibe on this feels laid back,
the hook hmmm.. tbh i ent feelin it would be much better with a singer on it but syaing that i cant sing either man so no hate for that,
i think if you proper pushed the vocals out the sound of the singing would be alot better, the verse is sick though flow is on point and very chilled so im feelin that lyrics are tight too gunna say 4/5 but based on the hook it took alot from how the track coulda sounded!

Great feedback man, thank you. Glad as a whole you enjoyed the song. Normally I try not to release low grade stuff, so when I laid that hook I was actually very satisfied with it cause I did A LOT better than I anticipated. Considering vocal lessons tbh. The verse is my favorite part of the song, cause rapping comes more natural to me than singing.

"Lost in the world, stuck in time, but I'm keepin you in line
Like a skater girl in Solano, 3-6-9"

One of my favorite lines in a while cause it has more meaning to it than most would know. I almost wanna say its a quadruple entendre! :O

Inline - skater, 3-6-9
Solano - Solano County in California's area code is 369 (not official unfortunately due to some changes in the past ), last name of my girlfriend

[ATLien666]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

Beat is really laidback, I likey.

Flow - Was overall good, but the delivery in the singing was lacking, so it came off sounding really monotone or more like you're adding a singsongy feel to it, like Wiz Khalifa. 4/5

Lyrics - Sticks to the point, and I can tell you definitely put some emotion into this song and it shows in the lyrics. 5/5

Overall - 4/5

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Artille - Midnight Light (Produced by Artixx)

This beat makes no sense. I want that shit asap lol, but you ripped it bro. I like the reverb and echo you used, it made it more emotional. This is something I could listen to in relationship problems, no homo though. Keep this up man, I listened to this like 3 times already. 4/5