Dreams Money Can Buy - Young and Reckless.

[ATLien666]

Shit got blocked on YouTube, but whatever.

I decided that I'mma redo this because I feel as if my flow is really rushed, but I would appreciate other feedback, so I can tweak it and tune it more.

http://limelinx.com/files/a3159fc989...cecf450d2ee0ec

http://hulkshare.com/bvzx7imiliwv

Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ng-2-them.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-artixx-2.html

[mykill]

Re: Dreams Money Can Buy - Young and Reckless.

Flow: C
Lyrics: B+

Overall: 4.5/5, I know I'm the first to bring you down, or to just give you some straight forward "this sucks" feedback. That said: This ain't half bad. You did good, real good, better than expected. 2nd guy has a decent flow, but he sounds like he's afraid of the mic. Tell that guy to speak up. Mixing for this joint even sounds on par (with the exception of 2nd guy's volume level). Who did it? You? If so, good job. I know I've been a big critic of your stuff, but this floats son. This right here is that level you been strivin' to be on. Good job. Glad you got there. Keep em comin'....

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Dreams Money Can Buy - Young and Reckless.

yeah this shit was nice. I was smiling when I heard the first few lines, they were funny. Seemed a little off towards the last bars though. I think you should redo the last couple bars of your verse. Just to make it sound better. Your verse was good for the smooth beat, I give it 4/5 keep it up

[ATLien666]

Re: Dreams Money Can Buy - Young and Reckless.

yeah this shit was nice. I was smiling when I heard the first few lines, they were funny. Seemed a little off towards the last bars though. I think you should redo the last couple bars of your verse. Just to make it sound better. Your verse was good for the smooth beat, I give it 4/5 keep it up

Ahaha, right on, bro and ight, I'mma rerecord it soon and tweak the last bars. Thanks!

Flow: C
Lyrics: B+

Overall: 4.5/5, I know I'm the first to bring you down, or to just give you some straight forward "this sucks" feedback. That said: This ain't half bad. You did good, real good, better than expected. 2nd guy has a decent flow, but he sounds like he's afraid of the mic. Tell that guy to speak up. Mixing for this joint even sounds on par (with the exception of 2nd guy's volume level). Who did it? You? If so, good job. I know I've been a big critic of your stuff, but this floats son. This right here is that level you been strivin' to be on. Good job. Glad you got there. Keep em comin'....

Thanks, and yes, I did the mixing myself. I always appreciate your feedback and I've got a lot more in store, that I think is on the same caliber as this, if not better.

[ATLien666]

Re: Dreams Money Can Buy - Young and Reckless.

Rewrote the entire verse and got a new feature:
Hulkshare.com (Intro) Dreams Money Can Buy.mp3

[MC_Crary]

Re: Dreams Money Can Buy - Young and Reckless.

You flowed well on both of the. I feel like this is better than anything you've ever done. Your second verse is more like your usual poetic stuff. I think you should take this and make it your own song. Really good man, good mastering too. You're definitely stepping it up.

[JSmooth]

Re: Dreams Money Can Buy - Young and Reckless.

flow- 4/5 really liked the flow. went great with the song it fit really well
lyrics- 3.5/5 pretty good, nothing amazing but it felt "real" which is always important
overall- 4/5 good stuff, i like ur style

[Konflikt]

Re: Dreams Money Can Buy - Young and Reckless.

I love this beat. The lyrics are good feels very personal. but the flow goes off beat a little on the first verse. Second verse rides the beat very well and is improved overall.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Dreams Money Can Buy - Young and Reckless.

Flow: C
Lyrics: B+

Overall: 4.5/5, I know I'm the first to bring you down, or to just give you some straight forward "this sucks" feedback. That said: This ain't half bad. You did good, real good, better than expected. 2nd guy has a decent flow, but he sounds like he's afraid of the mic. Tell that guy to speak up. Mixing for this joint even sounds on par (with the exception of 2nd guy's volume level). Who did it? You? If so, good job. I know I've been a big critic of your stuff, but this floats son. This right here is that level you been strivin' to be on. Good job. Glad you got there. Keep em comin'....

i just checked this guys music and i never understood why he gave u bad feedback. i actually like your song. you're better than that guy that keeps giving u bad feedback , im sure u already knew that and laugh everytime he comments on your songs lol. keep at it though, this beat is hot too.

[Coleon]

Re: Dreams Money Can Buy - Young and Reckless.

Good choice of flow over this but it wasn't executed too well in some places, with so few instrumentals it didn't stick out too much though. I felt like you rushed some of it and did it in a monotone fashion. Your lyrics were good. Second guy has similar flaws. I feel like this beat was just a bad choice because it's so difficult to stay on it. It didn't sound bad though, just the mechanics were sketchy, keep it up.