Dreezy - I'm On One

[DreezyBaby]

Something I just did since I havent dropped nothing lately,
I'll be back in the studio alot more than I have been

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Verse 1

I took yo chick to the hole; penetration
I pick hoes through process of elimination
Ran up in his spot and just left; infiltration
Highway to the money thats my only destination
Ima need a lil this, and a lil bit of that
A lil bit of mouth girl a lil bit of cat
I bust it wide open then I tell her bring it back
Then she bring it back, back, back, back, back
You just a maget, I' m fly but heaven seem so close
I'm Papa Murphys, but you never ever seen no dough
Fuck the ref and the coach, you know my team go pro
You think you see me, but you in the past square; photo
I'm headed to the top and I'm never looking down
I popped his bitch, she got my balls she gone fumble now
I goto sleep on these niggas I need a fuckin' gown
I run this country and ya moms, I'm ya Uncle Sam

Verse 2

She see me looking, but I see her staring
She don't need a curfew, this dick gone be her parent
Cuz she gone suck up to it, aint no stuck up to it
I'm a winner winner winner, um fuck losing
Bitch stop playing
I'm a eastside Blizz-ood I'll shoot you where you stand
I got alot of fans, you just got alot of stans
And I swear my gun a trip, he will fuck all yo plans
I got cash disorder
My money got a country, come and pass this border
I'm a king in a tower, let my goons do the action
I aim and clip, and Jamie flip, Braxton
Yall got this shit backwards, my money doing backflips
You fake niggas is actors, pussy you a actress
I'm not gone kill you, just tell me yo address
I'll pull up at yo shit with AK.s in a tractor

Verse 3

I think you on yo way to heaven gates, only fuck I never date
I make it rain and tell the weather wait, blowing strong kush
Now tell me what you on blood
I'm on that space weed smoking Luke, Star Wars
I'll fuck the world until it have a kid
But nigga you'll be pushing flowers, dafadil
I eat rappers and burp verses after meals
Animal mind, nigga I just attack and kill
Somebody on some new shit, I'm on one like two is
Only trippin' off me and my crew bitch, you aint gon' do shit
1 finger in the middle and I'm out, fuck dueces
Now I got yo chick wiggidy wiggidy wet
Blood my set, and yea yea yea niggas be seein' me riggidy rep
I swear I'm on, I'm never off
Only thing off, is um her draws
I'm a dog, money like frogs
Green as shit, would I mean that shit

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[YoungTune.]

Re: Dreezy - I'm On One

Best Studio rapper is finally back.




Just streamed it...dope track...nice lyrics/flow bro.

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Dreezy - I'm On One

Best Studio rapper is finally back.




Just streamed it...dope track...nice lyrics/flow bro.

Thanks my bro

[Artille]

Re: Dreezy - I'm On One

Nice, first thing I've heard from you in months though. Personally, I feel you could have came harder on some parts, but overall your kill this lyrically as usual. There are just a few points where I question the mixing and wonder why you would do other things (such as the back, back, back thing AND when you gave your own rendition of the chorus). Nice to see you drop a track with three verses as your "return" track to Tha Studio. Flow was consistent throughout the song, I'll be looking for you to enter Tha Studio Cypher and consistently drop music. Hit me up if you ever wanna work together.

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Dreezy - I'm On One

Nice, first thing I've heard from you in months though. Personally, I feel you could have came harder on some parts, but overall your kill this lyrically as usual. There are just a few points where I question the mixing and wonder why you would do other things (such as the back, back, back thing AND when you gave your own rendition of the chorus). Nice to see you drop a track with three verses as your "return" track to Tha Studio. Flow was consistent throughout the song, I'll be looking for you to enter Tha Studio Cypher and consistently drop music. Hit me up if you ever wanna work together.

I got you bro. Thanks for the feedback man.

[kryspy]

Re: Dreezy - I'm On One

It was pretty decent. It's cool to chuckle a few rhymes here and there but it sounded like you were jocking Lil Wayne. You had a lot of punchlines. Well actually, punchlines were your whole song lol. You were ripping it but like I said, it was too much punchlines. And what Artille said.
Flow: 4/5
Mixing:3/5
Lyrics:4/5
Overall:4/5

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Dreezy - I'm On One

Best Studio rapper is finally back.

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LOL u must be deaf. this was garbage. nothing but punchlines. and alot of weak punchlines.

go check out jsmooth and jdub, those guys are lightyears ahead of dreezybaby lol.
i wanna hear a real song instead of just punchlines about money/guns/fucking bitches.

Something Verse 1

I took yo chick to the hole; penetration

really? man. after that line i knew it was gonna be a bunch of bullshit lines throughout.

Verse 2

I'm a eastside Blizz-ood I'll shoot you where you stand

u an eastside blood? okay wayne.

Verse 3

I'm on that space weed smoking Luke, Star Wars
I'll fuck the world until it have a kid
But nigga you'll be pushing flowers, dafadil
Now I got yo chick wiggidy wiggidy wet
Blood my set, and yea yea yea niggas be seein' me riggidy rep
I swear I'm on, I'm never off
Only thing off, is um her draws
I'm a dog, money like frogs
Green as shit, would I mean that shit

wtf ?, really man? most of the punchlines are terrible.
so u make the whole song punchlines hoping to get a few decent ones lol.

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Dreezy - I'm On One

It was pretty decent. It's cool to chuckle a few rhymes here and there but it sounded like you were jocking Lil Wayne. You had a lot of punchlines. Well actually, punchlines were your whole song lol. You were ripping it but like I said, it was too much punchlines. And what Artille said.
Flow: 4/5
Mixing:3/5
Lyrics:4/5
Overall:4/5

preciate it brah!

[chippyr]

Re: Dreezy - I'm On One

First and foremost I just wanna say, that it was pretty decent. The biggest problem I have is that is seems like you are jacking Wayne and Big Sean's styles. Some of the lines were kinda wack, but were mostly on point. Overall the lyrics were just okay, but you definitely aren't bad bro. Keep at it. 3/5

[JSmooth]

Re: Dreezy - I'm On One

Flow4/5 There were def some points where it lacked but for the most part it was straight
Lyrics- 3/5 I liked some of the punchlines but like some people said maybe a bit too much which made some of them sound kinda awkward b/c when u have so many its hard to make them all great if u know what im sayin.
overall- 4/5 This is the first song ive heard from u and ill def listen to some more but just work on switchin things up

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Dreezy - I'm On One

^^ thanks and preciate the feed guys,ill def start posting some more. And hopefully collaborating with some guys.

[MyFutureIsOdd]

Re: Dreezy - I'm On One

was feelin the 3rd verse more than any other, this wasn't bad bro! sounded like you were just having fun with the track.
4/5