J-Smooth- PNL (Pain and Liquor)

[JSmooth]

Before i found music i was in a struggle tryin to find out who i really am, so i kinda just put that dark time into words here. This is from my First Steps mixtape (mixtape before summer school'n). Haven't posted in a while so i figured i would put this up here. I also have a better mic now hah.

Appreciate the feedback though and be ready for the STUDIO CYPHER!

PNL- LimeLinx - Preview - 12 P.N.L.mp3

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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post534827
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post534812

[kryspy]

Re: J-Smooth- PNL (Pain and Liquor)

I like this shit. You could hear the emotions behind the mic. You got potential, and I don't say that to a lot of people.
Flow: 5/5
Lyrics:4/5
Mix:4/5
Beat: 5/5 (matches the song a lot)
Overall: 4/5
Keep up the good shit

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: J-Smooth- PNL (Pain and Liquor)

u can hear the static in the mic that cuts in while u rappin. also, i can hear the hard s's. i dunno if u used noise reduction, but i didnt hear it in your other songs.
this song is good but boring. i didnt like the hook, but i ya voice deeper in this song and i like ya flow in this, its not as whiny as your other songs.
is this the old mic or new mic?

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- PNL (Pain and Liquor)

appreciate the feedback kryspy
lilchuckie- yea its the old mic. my new one is a lot better like u said, but i just felt like postin somethin

[DreezyBaby]

Re: J-Smooth- PNL (Pain and Liquor)

This is nice.. I like your beat choice, first song I've heard from you though. Your flow is good,voice fits your flow so I can feel it.
Flow 3/5
Beat 4/5
overall 4

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- PNL (Pain and Liquor)

Dreezy- appreciate the listen and feedback bruh. That's one of the first songs i recorded on that mixtape so u should check out my latest mixtape, Summer School'n. IMO its my best work.

[MC_Crary]

Re: J-Smooth- PNL (Pain and Liquor)

I felt you on this one man. I love when you can hear the truth in the lyrics, hear the pain in the voice. I actually had this beat when working on my last mix tape. Seems like we like the same kinda stuff. We still gotta get it in soon. I'll send something your way in the next few weeks. I'm just getting back to work.

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- PNL (Pain and Liquor)

mccrary- thanks bro thats what i was goin for. just a real song with strong emotion. But yea im def down to collab. just hmu whenever