J-Smooth- Round Here

[JSmooth]

Another song from my First Steps Mixtape. It has features from two of my FNF (First N Flight) boys. If u haven't listened to me before im on the first verse and chorus. Appreciate the listens/feedback.

Round Here- LimeLinx - Preview - 15 Round Here.mp3

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[JSmooth]

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no thoughts? even if their good or bad?

[BlakeJay]

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The Hook was kinda catchy..i like it!..U got some real Meaningful lyrics..Lyrics 3.9/5 Flow 3.9/5...pretty good overall song u mixed it well

[MC_Crary]

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Yiou came pretty hard on this lyrically man, didn't expect that from the hook. I didn't really like the hook until I heard your verse. The way you opened the track definitely helped a lot. Seemed like the other guys weren't coming as hard as you. The last guy was better than the second. I was more focused on your verse though. This is one of your best verses that Ive heard.

[Tunechi2835]

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pretty sick bro i like the hook and the flow

[JSmooth]

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appreciate the feedback guys.
@mccrary- yea i try to make everything in my songs go together and have meaning so im glad u paid attention to the lyrics...some people ( a lot of people) dont do that lol, appreciate it

[Sentus]

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That was actually a pretty good hook, I could see this being a hook if it was in studio quality.

Honestly though, sorry but this is everything I despise about rap. You just went on a club beat with wack lyrics to try and make a catchy song. You had no creativity or originality whatsoever. I'm not hating but take my feed for what it's worth.

[mykill]

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Jsmooth // Flow: A // Lyrics: B
Guy 2 // Flow: A // Lyrics: B
Guy 3 // Flow: B+ // Lyrics: B-

Overall: 4/5, The hook is good, these dudes are right. But its missing something. Maybe some more backing vocals. Hit it with a doubler or something and it would "pop" more. J, you got a great flow. I dont say that about many people, but you're flow's like butter - it just melts on the track. Your FNF guys are pretty good too. Where's this mixtape at? Have you not released it yet or am I just blind and missed the post? Something sounds off with the mastering though. Maybe its my headphones, but it sounds like the bass is super low. There's no "umph", know what I mean? Guy 3's lyrics seemed a bit forced. They didnt sound too natural for some reason. Could be just me. Kudos.

[JSmooth]

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@sentus- I totally respect ur opinion and appreciate the feedback but i dont understand how i had "no creativity or originality whatsover"?

@mykill- Thanks for the in depth feedback. Yea this was my first solo project so i guess u can say it was an experiment but the mastering has gotten a lot better since then. I haven't put my First Steps mixtape on here but i can if u want. I did put my Summer School'n mixtape on here though which imo is my best work. Im expecting my next mixtape X's and O's to be even better. Thanks

[Artille]

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Wow, this is dope. First off, the hook was the most amazing part of the song, very catchy! Your flow on the first verse was perfect. Lyrics were nice, you clearly had the best verse. Your friends weren't really saying shit, but all three verses "sounded" nice. Mixing is nice on this one too! I wish the beat had a bit more bang to it though. Anyways, keep it up, this is a great track for your mixtape.

[JSmooth]

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@artille- preciate the feedback for sure. When i made the song i thought the hook was gonna catch some peoples attention so its good to get some positive feedback on that.