Lets Battle

[js11]

Re: Lets Battle

"Check me"?..Ok let me check ya...
hmm...yeah... uhh... Let me correct ya.
I said I was KING, boy you just the jester--
Tell that BITCH in the mirror that I don't respect her.You'll never be as good as me so cut the fuckin fantasy.
You've never even fucked a pussy outside of your family. ( )
...You aint fresh, You're rotten.
You'll NEVER go hard, You go soft like cotton.
You're easily forgotten but they all know Me
Metalhead: The Studio's best MC.--
I Engineer verses like I went to M.I.T.
Callin me "Marie" makes you sound like you're three.
This a Big Boy battle. Couldn't find a better rhyme?
The next battle we have, please take your time
because your flow is so horrible it should be a crime.
Your lyrical structure is poorly designed
so I suggest that you accept the back seat and resign.
Your rap didn't contain even One strong line.
Come back and try to battle when your flow's more refined.
...Some lines don't even make sense!
"Slurp, Slurp, goes my cock", wow, that shit is intense.
Your cock has a tongue? Damn, that problem's immense
and your trying to rap? Prioritize your events!
First, you need to get that checked out.
Then you can TRY to fix the flow, but we all have doubts.
Homie you rap like a fucking girl scout
So get to work while I make your bitch's pussy lips pout.
..I didn't buy The Studio, I earned it.
I jumped in outta nowhere on a track and burned it.
Bitch I've been spittin flames ever since
and your girl has been givin me brain ever since.
Now I'd like to say on HQ's behalf,
Spit your last pussy verse. Give us a laugh.

-Money

you didnt really check me, but ok fuck it
my shit hits you hard make you wanna kick da bucket
we all know you a pussy,... bitch go head and suck it
my dick getting hairy,... bitch go head and pluck it..ouch
never mind ill just get a bitch 2 fuck it
see ya in the street got my gun, ill go ahead and tuck it
got da silencer on, dont wanna make a raucous
you get so much dick, you know where da cock is
got da game on lock, you dont know where da lock is
..you want something 2 laugh at, go head and repeat yo freestyle
im so real nigga, you can cath me in da guarantee isle
when i need pussy,... i just fuck my bitch meanwhile
when you need dick all you hit is re-dial
you say you aint gay, bitch you just in de-nial
you dont need to take it out on me now...
..you say you a king, aint nobody crown you
nigga you a joke, somebody should clown you
nigga's to afraid, to hangout around you
kus they know pussy..will never surround you
my words to heavy, they will just pound you
bitch im a dog, i blood hound you!
..ah your words wakk, they're an irritation
haha you a phony,you a fake,you an imitation
if NO PIECES OF SHIT ALLOWED! guessing you don't got an invitation
nigga iRULE call me head of legislation
you see a dick, then your fighting your temptation
your gay mans dick leave you with constipation
i defeat wakk rappers, and you are just a demonstration

[trillphill]

Re: Lets Battle

"Check me"?..Ok let me check ya...
hmm...yeah... uhh... Let me correct ya.
I said I was KING, boy you just the jester--
Tell that BITCH in the mirror that I don't respect her.
You'll never be as good as me so cut the fuckin fantasy.
You've never even fucked a pussy outside of your family. ( )
...You aint fresh, You're rotten.
You'll NEVER go hard, You go soft like cotton.
You're easily forgotten but they all know Me
Metalhead: The Studio's best MC.--
I Engineer verses like I went to M.I.T.
Callin me "Marie" makes you sound like you're three.
This a Big Boy battle. Couldn't find a better rhyme?
The next battle we have, please take your time
because your flow is so horrible it should be a crime.
Your lyrical structure is poorly designed
so I suggest that you accept the back seat and resign.
Your rap didn't contain even One strong line.
Come back and try to battle when your flow's more refined.
...Some lines don't even make sense!
"Slurp, Slurp, goes my cock", wow, that shit is intense.
Your cock has a tongue? Damn, that problem's immense
and your trying to rap? Prioritize your events!
First, you need to get that checked out.
Then you can TRY to fix the flow, but we all have doubts.
Homie you rap like a fucking girl scout
So get to work while I make your bitch's pussy lips pout.
..I didn't buy The Studio, I earned it.
I jumped in outta nowhere on a track and burned it.
Bitch I've been spittin flames ever since
and your girl has been givin me brain ever since.
Now I'd like to say on HQ's behalf,
Spit your last pussy verse. Give us a laugh.

-Money

if moneyiseverything then im jackin your green like lil kids candy,
these verses will fuck your mind like the ganja leaf.
but i don't think you could handle a world of all money,
just ask, cus no Biggie i have niggas tryna kill me.
this game is no fairytale. take all you own like im flyin the jolly roger sail.
but from the look on your avatar you don't seem very into this,
leave you cross-eyed when you buckle from my knuckle hittin ya eye kid, shit,
call me hepatitis bitch cus you shouldn't fuck with my spit.
and i hope you know what that is from sexual education,
i beat off wack niggas like you more then masturbation.
yea i think that last line made you sick like constipation.
and hatin on js11, i can tell you're desperate man.
you're win to loss ratio must be like chinese girls to guys...damn.
but i stay flawless, and you say you're platinum.. i say you're gloss less.
there's no round 1 through 10, cus im the boss bitch.
i'd take and hide your head like girls do on my dick, no spit.
or i can end you now like 50 cent against Ross and pop ya like champagne.
you'd 'walk' out like FDR.. minus the fortune and fame.
but i'll let you retry like this is a video game.
you'll be stuck on this boss battle runnin in circles like a gerbil,
if you're human then i'm outta this world.
no H.G. Wells we gotta war of the worlds,
you're done for, but i'll make ya a mural.
cus you're lines are soft like my bitches' tits,
you're sexuality is wavy like lay's chips,
and not even Oscar would take your wack shit.
time's come down to this, let me finish Horseman number 1 of 4 real quick.
cus if you rap it's gonna turn into the apocalypse.


EDIT* js11 posted while i was typin still... just sayin if it's not obvious

[MoneyIsEverything]

Re: Lets Battle

js11, sick verse.

[js11]

Re: Lets Battle

js11, sick verse.

thanks dawg
i feel im improving a bit...

[MoneyIsEverything]

Re: Lets Battle

js11, sick verse.

thanks dawg
i feel im improving a bit...

You are for sure, keep it up man.

[Lil' Chamillitary]

Re: Lets Battle

Uh oh Amin comes in
Murda ya all Amen
YA Ain't no rapper stop fakin
No Im not playin
See that AK
I use it every fukin day
Mr.Kill em all ya better make way
Coz ur ass gonna be cut and sold on ebay
I don''t spit fire I blaze
Cough cough good as leaf so much haze
Once I get my single done
kids will be sayin Im number
parents will hate me
Media will debate me
Hoes will wanna suck me
OGs will wanna track me
Haters will buck me
And ur fake ass will wanna fuck me
Man WTFis u sayin ? IDK help me !
Damn the weed hit me too hard
bACK AT YA If u r king then Im the Ace Card

[js11]

Re: Lets Battle

Uh oh Amin comes in
Murda ya all Amen
YA Ain't no rapper stop fakin
No Im not playin
See that AK
I use it every fukin day
Mr.Kill em all ya better make way
Coz ur ass gonna be cut and sold on ebay
I don''t spit fire I blaze
Cough cough good as leaf so much haze
Once I get my single done
kids will be sayin Im number
parents will hate me
Media will debate me
Hoes will wanna suck me
OGs will wanna track me
Haters will buck me
And ur fake ass will wanna fuck me
Man WTFis u sayin ? IDK help me !
Damn the weed hit me too hard
bACK AT YA If u r king then Im the Ace Card

you say you're the ace card, then bitch ill fold ya
hurt you so bad, you gon need some one to hold ya
i dont wanna rub it in, but bitch ill tell you that i told ya
you feed off my words, you can say i mold ya
..ha all hoes wanna do me, all hoes wanna diss you
girls wanna 4get you, they dont even miss you
instead of girls bitch, homo's wanna kiss you
i beat you like beat, you can call it swiss beat you
your lame words are like food to me i juss wanna eat you
[no homo] you are like a virus, i am going to delete you
you think your a good rapper, homie i will incomplete you
nigguh you are old, i am so whisky neat new
haha i dont even know what i am saying
ha scare you off to a church, kneeled down hands up, praying
make your homo ass, work for me NONE PAYING
shoot you 35 times in da head, nah im just playing
its more like 53, leave the blood out ya head spraying
drop you in tha street , leave you there laying!
..yae, damn nigguh, your rap game is just so lame
call me dragon, cus you can catch me spitin some flame
docta said theres nothing wrong with me, but i know im INSANE!