Yung Cash - Marvin's Room and I'm On One ft. Kidd Fame.

[ATLien666]

Looking back, I don't like these tracks that much anymore, but here ya' go.

Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...turn-feed.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...im-on-one.html

Marvin's Room:
http://hulkshare.com/4tyyu6kmc8te

I'm On One:
http://limelinx.com/files/3687955aad...cef27970706e18

[ATLien666]

Re: Yung Cash - Marvin's Room and I'm On One ft. Kidd Fame.

Damn, I feel neglected, lol.

[MyFutureIsOdd]

Re: Yung Cash - Marvin's Room and I'm On One ft. Kidd Fame.

Damn, I feel neglected, lol.

Probably because we can't listen to the song without downloading it...

[ATLien666]

Re: Yung Cash - Marvin's Room and I'm On One ft. Kidd Fame.

Probably because we can't listen to the song without downloading it...

Normally limelinx works, idk.

[mykill]

Re: Yung Cash - Marvin's Room and I'm On One ft. Kidd Fame.

Marvin's Room
Overall: 3.5/5, If you're gonna do it, do the whole thing. I got an "I'm on One" track me and MAC did right now, and I'm not dropping it because A) I suck at singing and B) It's still got the Drake hook on it...but then again, we arent finished with that track lol. Your flow in the first couple of bars is perfect. After that, it gets in that swishy style that you're good for. Its off seldom and works pretty well. Watch your "plosives" on the mic. You got a Pop Filter? Lyrics sound on point. I like the mash-up style of this, but I think I'd rather hear you on the whole beat. That Drake/Weeknd type track style fits perfect with you, with all your emotional relationship lyrics. Try to do some more tracks like this over original beats similar.

I'm on One
What format is it in? it says its an .mp3, but the format is wrong apparently. You encode it as a .wav? Fix this so we can hear it.


We need to do a track in the future. I'm serious.

[ATLien666]

Re: Yung Cash - Marvin's Room and I'm On One ft. Kidd Fame.

Marvin's Room
Overall: 3.5/5, If you're gonna do it, do the whole thing. I got an "I'm on One" track me and MAC did right now, and I'm not dropping it because A) I suck at singing and B) It's still got the Drake hook on it...but then again, we arent finished with that track lol. Your flow in the first couple of bars is perfect. After that, it gets in that swishy style that you're good for. Its off seldom and works pretty well. Watch your "plosives" on the mic. You got a Pop Filter? Lyrics sound on point. I like the mash-up style of this, but I think I'd rather hear you on the whole beat. That Drake/Weeknd type track style fits perfect with you, with all your emotional relationship lyrics. Try to do some more tracks like this over original beats similar.

I'm on One
What format is it in? it says its an .mp3, but the format is wrong apparently. You encode it as a .wav? Fix this so we can hear it.


We need to do a track in the future. I'm serious.

Ight, I feel you. I'mma try just doing the whole track, cause I had a chorus written for it, too. And yeah, but it wasn't here, so it had those notable "puhh" noises. and thanks, I got some original tracks I was saving for my mixtape, but I might drop one soon! I changed the I'm on One, so hopefully it works now, haah.

and it's whatever, bro. If you got a song, just PM it to me and I'll have it done.

[Artille]

Re: Yung Cash - Marvin's Room and I'm On One ft. Kidd Fame.

Marvins Room: Meh, not sure about this one. I think the original is one of a kind, so my opinion may be a bit biased. Lyrically, it was great. You stayed on topic throughout and I was definitely feeling the direction you went. Flow was nice, your voice however lacked the emotion to make me REALLY feel what you're saying. There were a few slipups throughout all three verses, but you managed to pull it all together without it ruining the song too much. It was also hard to understand wht you were saying at times, mainly in the third verse. I don't think the vocals were mixed in very well either. 3/5 for your effort at a tough track.

I'm On One: Hmm... mastering is much better in this one. Your voice fit the beat pretty well, compared to Marvin's Room. Flow was nice, I like the emotion in the first verse more. Second verse had a more traditional flow, but it was still nice. Lyrics were alright, but nothing really stood out to me in either verse. 2.5/5 complete the song.