The Unveiling(Finished Cypher Verse)

[BlakeJay]

The cypher limited everyone to 16 bars so i kept it to that but this was my entire verse to the Instrumental..It has a few more bars and is Mixed a lil better..Just thought i would post it

FeedBack:

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post546244
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post546129


[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2e4TrVSawf4[/youtube]



Props to my man WeezYIsCraaazY for the Cover

[WeezYIsCraaazY]

Re: The Unveiling(Finished Cypher Verse)

Wow, Really Like This Bro

Your Flow Is Nice (Better Than Most) & You Had Some Nice Lyrical Points.

Keep It Up!

[BlakeJay]

Re: The Unveiling(Finished Cypher Verse)

Thanks 4 the Feedback ..and The Sick Cover lls

[TheDude]

Re: The Unveiling(Finished Cypher Verse)

Sweet im feelin this. Good lyric flow not jus ramblin about shit.
keep at it for real man.

[xXMajestyXx]

Re: The Unveiling(Finished Cypher Verse)

I feel dis shit u said it right it gotta real nice old school feel to
4.5/5 flow was on point keep it up

[BlakeJay]

Re: The Unveiling(Finished Cypher Verse)

I feel dis shit u said it right it gotta real nice old school feel to
4.5/5 flow was on point keep it up

Thanks cuzo..I appreciate the feedback

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Sweet im feelin this. Good lyric flow not jus ramblin about shit.
keep at it for real man.

Thank you my good sir

[mykill]

Re: The Unveiling(Finished Cypher Verse)

Flow: A
Lyrics: A+++

Overall: 5/5, This. aint. no. bullshit. Good job Blake, good job! Some very very nice bars here. I'm glad to seem some people around here spitting BARS and not just dropping punchline after punchline in every verse they do. This is a Lil' Wayne forum, but even Weezy is more creative then that. Back to the topic: No one else in the last Cypher can hold a torch to this. You got it mane, keep it up. I wanna here more of your stuff asap.

[BlakeJay]

Re: The Unveiling(Finished Cypher Verse)

Flow: A
Lyrics: A+++

Overall: 5/5, This. aint. no. bullshit. Good job Blake, good job! Some very very nice bars here. I'm glad to seem some people around here spitting BARS and not just dropping punchline after punchline in every verse they do. This is a Lil' Wayne forum, but even Weezy is more creative then that. Back to the topic: No one else in the last Cypher can hold a torch to this. You got it mane, keep it up. I wanna here more of your stuff asap.

I appreciate the positive feedback ...i accept negative feedback too lol..i know i gotta improve on some things..thanks though

Just followed ya twitter..Follow Back thats where ima be releasing most of my music http://twitter.com/#!/Blake_Jayy08

[mirage42]

Re: The Unveiling(Finished Cypher Verse)

O_O

holy.... awesome track bro

[BlakeJay]

Re: The Unveiling(Finished Cypher Verse)

O_O

holy.... awesome track bro

Thank You sir

[RiCH HOMiE QUiL]

Re: The Unveiling(Finished Cypher Verse)

Holy shit this is impressive.

Lyrics: 5
Flow: 4
Great emotion!

[BlakeJay]

Re: The Unveiling(Finished Cypher Verse)

Holy shit this is impressive.

Lyrics: 5
Flow: 4
Great emotion!

thank you sir ill try to work on the flow a lil bit on whatever i put up next