Majesty - Secrets Ft. Trust Will Be On *Mentally Ill*

[xXMajestyXx]

Secrets Ft. Trust
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[xXMajestyXx]

Re: Majesty - Secrets Ft. Trust Will Be On *Mentally Ill*

Bump dis shit

[ATLien666]

Re: Majesty - Secrets Ft. Trust Will Be On *Mentally Ill*

Fuck, that simple is sick and I'm glad you're back.

Flow - 3.5/5 It fell off at times, but overall it was cool. Feature: 4/5 - He was kinda slippin' off at the beginning, but he held it down the rest of the song.

Lyrics - 4/5 - The second verse was really good, I definitely liked that. But I didn't really hear a lot of great metaphors or nothin', but it had some nice lines and lyricism. The feature's verse was pretty good, too. I liked how they had a lil' storyline, props on that.

Other - You have a good voice, it's like a signature.

Overall - 3.9/5.

[Sentus]

Re: Majesty - Secrets Ft. Trust Will Be On *Mentally Ill*

1st guy- Energy and mic presence is pretty good, it sounded like you had a lisp or something though and that got kind of annoying. Lyrics were average, you definitely could add some multis and wordplay to improve in that category. Main problem was your mixing/quality. Your vocals sounded extremely watered down.

2nd guy- This verse was actually pretty good. You had a great delivery, flow was solid throughout and your mixing sounded a lot better. Only problem was your lyrics as well. Same advice as the guy before.

[mykill]

Re: Majesty - Secrets Ft. Trust Will Be On *Mentally Ill*

Get. A. New. Mic. (If and only if that's the problem. Might just be the mastering)

Majesty // Flow: A- // Lyrics: B+
Trust // Flow: A // Lyrics: B

Overall: 3.25/5, This takes hits from that vocal quality. Beat is cool. That's a pretty fly sample the producer used for the beat. Dont think the mastering on Verse 2 was that good. Just sounds like a lot of unnatural echoing. The first verse was mastered well, but #2 was iffy. Verse 3 was alright. Something must have went haywire at the end of verse 2. Trust was a good addition to this. You two mesh well on this track. Pretty good track to bump to when you're walking somewhere, or just ridin' around.

[xXMajestyXx]

Re: Majesty - Secrets Ft. Trust Will Be On *Mentally Ill*

Well aprreciated yea we still goin thru recordin new programs still gotta learn the shit