Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

[Sentus]

Well I had time to record today and I got tired of recording shit for the mixtape and for random collabs so I just decided to do this real quick.

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[mykill]

Re: Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

Flow: B
Lyrics: A+

Overall: 4.25/5, Lyrics on this are ridiculously on point. That's something I think some people can't even touch you on. Your lyrics are SERIOUS. Dont know about that "Get wit me or go home" tag though lol. Might be weak. Other than that, delivery was consistent to your previous offerings. Thinking back to your other freestyles, I'm still gonna have to say "Kush" was better lol. But this plays a close 2nd. Really close. Only pointers I can give and/or suggest is that you are getting there, but you still need to learn to "ride" the beat a bit better. It'll help to keep your stuff from all sounding the same, because of it getting the same type of delivery. But none the less, good job.

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

Thanks for the feed, and yeah I know my delivery has been similar but I have a ton of songs saved up where it's different. Thanks for the feed though.

[Tunechi2835]

Re: Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

pretty good but yur voice sounded kinda weird, mayb a little too loud

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

Thanks for checking it out bro

[Artille]

Re: Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

This is pretty legit, kinda short like a DIEZEL song, but at least I believe it's a freestyle unlike his work. Your voice is what throws it off for me at first, but I got over it with the nice flow, although I agree it is similar to some of your other recent material. Not much to say about this though, but lyrically it was average (it was a freestyle though, so those average lyrics are really good compared to my freestyle abilities). Good shit.

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

Thanks for checking it out, it wasn't a real freestyle though lol

[broc717]

Re: Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

this shit fire man, im diggin the lyrics a lot, i like the flow too, if your lookin for constructive criticism id say work on your delivery, everything else is def on point tho

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

This is pretty legit, kinda short like a DIEZEL song, but at least I believe it's a freestyle unlike his work.

smh man, all my shit is freestyles off the dome, and this song sentus did obviously wasnt lol. i dont know why u dont believe me.


@SENTUS

this was actually one of your best.

you delivered nice, flow was on point, and nice lyrics.

your voice got that nasal shit goin on though, thats what threw everybody off.

4/5

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

Thanks yall, I think I need to have better beat selection though tbh

[Pestrator]

Re: Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

this is good ur lyrics were on point n u were on beat only thing is you need to wokr on your deleviery bc it didnt sound very smooth like, it kinda sounded like your voice was fighting with the beat instead of both of them just flowing together if u know wat i mean. But its god bro, keep it up!

[JSmooth]

Re: Sentus- I'm On One Freestyle

Flow- B you werent off beat but u weren't necessarily on it either if that makes sense
Lyrics A- Not really much to complain about, good shit
overall B+ Nice track, try experimenting with different flow/delivery it might help