The Killurz - We On 1 (I'm On One Freestyle)

[mykill]

Bandwagon rap.



Download/Stream: We On 1 (I'm On One Freestyle)

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[Artille]

Re: The Killurz - We On 1 (I'm On One Freestyle)

Not really feeling this one. The opening singing was pretty bad, but props for the attempt on it. You had a nice flow though, the lyrics were just average. Sounded like a bunch of random rhymes mixed together at times. Crary's flow was pretty boring on this one, but his voice kept me interested. Lyrically the whole song was a good collabo, but neither of you had any bars that really stood out to me. You guys work real;y good together, which makes this track more listenable. MyKill had much better mixing than Crary's did. Where's Crary been? Haven't seen him post anything since he dropped his mixtape.

2.5/5

[mykill]

Re: The Killurz - We On 1 (I'm On One Freestyle)

I agree with ya Artille. I mostly did this for the beat, cause its so good. But in the end, everything I did just seemed forced or off kilter. MAC's getting his set up back to par, his old comp died on him, so he's in the process of rebuilding and retweaking everything. I mixed MC Crary's part, so sorry about that. Trying to get everything leveled right was a little hard, and I'll probably try to work on this today more and put out a better quality version.

[MC_Crary]

Re: The Killurz - We On 1 (I'm On One Freestyle)

Thanks for the listen Artille. I'm pretty much back to work now, it's just hard for me to find time to record lately. Expect some new stuff from me soon.

[Artille]

Re: The Killurz - We On 1 (I'm On One Freestyle)

Bump

WTF, no feedback? This man contributes in every thread.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: The Killurz - We On 1 (I'm On One Freestyle)

i see u expressing your singin side more and not givin a fuck, nice.

mykill flow and lyrics was actually better than usual, i think his effort on this was good, overall 4/5. mixnig/mastering was good too.
u must've fixed your mic problem.

crary flow and lyrics was good as well. he used he trademark flow, and somehow it worked on this beat. 4/5. mixing/mastering wasnt like mykills though.

nice job , keep it up.

[Tha Professor]

Re: The Killurz - We On 1 (I'm On One Freestyle)

Yeah, i also like the fact that you're trying to experiment with your singing - keep working on that. You
Crary's verse is not mixed properly, but he flows fine. but i still couldn't hear some of the lyrics, but that could be cuz i am playing it thorough laptop speakers.
the third verse made me think how you can really improve mykill. Listen! i have no doubt that you can flow but i'm imagining something here, you should try to pronounce words more interesting so you can grab the listeners attention much more.
i noticed this when u said "I walk around the club, fuck everybody".
instead of pronouncing the EV you can play around with it.. even if its the smallest difference like pronouncing it errybody. that's how weezy said that line and it sounds so sick!

[pdolo5784]

Re: The Killurz - We On 1 (I'm On One Freestyle)

nice good shit