Artille - MCS (Prod. by OmariMC)

[Artille]

Hey guys, I wasn't gonna do this, but I really want to boost some activity in Tha Studio as well as get your thoughts on this track I recorded yesterday. It's called MCS and is an unfinished project. I just wanna know what you guys think of it lyrically and most importantly how the mixing on it is to you. My mixtape will be called "Artillery" and isn't in the works just yet.

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[Tunechi2835]

Re: Artille - MCS (Prod. by OmariMC)

overall its pretty dope !

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Artille - MCS (Prod. by OmariMC)

u str8, u just need more emotion in ya delivery. everything else decent.

what kinda mic u usin and are u recordin in a big room??

[Artille]

Re: Artille - MCS (Prod. by OmariMC)

overall its pretty dope !

Thanks for checkin it out.

u str8, u just need more emotion in ya delivery. everything else decent.

what kinda mic u usin and are u recordin in a big room??

Thanks man, and I agree my emotion is still lacking. I'm using an Audio-Technica AT2020 and recording in a normal sized bedroom.

[mykill]

Re: Artille - MCS (Prod. by OmariMC)

Flow: C+
Lyrics: A

Overall: 3/5, Good concept here. Agree with the comments on the flow and delivery being "lacking". You got a good voice for rap, just need to develop your flow and delivery more and then you'll good. I like the changes up with the vocals, and how mastering effect changes used. It's nice to see someone go in for bar after bar, and not just 16s, and be able to carry the song/beat continuously. You did a very nice job with this, and I hope that you have the time to go back and fix it up before you drop the tape. Even the pause to plug the tape was well placed and handled. Cheers mate.

[broc717]

Re: Artille - MCS (Prod. by OmariMC)

fire. I am feelin the flow and lyrics, and the beat is on some epic shit, the only thing i could really think of is the vocals seem a bit too loud, but its definitely a track i'd playback, stay on your grind fam

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Artille - MCS (Prod. by OmariMC)

Thanks for checkin it out.

Thanks man, and I agree my emotion is still lacking. I'm using an Audio-Technica AT2020 and recording in a normal sized bedroom.

Yo leave me some feed too. i dont care if u leave bad feedback lol, i just need feedback.

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