Artille - Hopes and Dreams (Remix)

[Artille]

Quick verse I did over Wiz Khalifa's "Hopes & Dreams" record. Gettin high, just havin fun, kill shit.





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[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Artille - Hopes and Dreams (Remix)

no emotion/character/energy .... need more swag

go listen to some lil b and then redo this track.

[WKinhere]

Re: Artille - Hopes and Dreams (Remix)

no emotion/character/energy .... need more swag
go listen to some lil b and then redo this track.

What he said

[JSmooth]

Re: Artille - Hopes and Dreams (Remix)

Flow- 4/5 ( nice flow, but emotion and presence on the track is lacking)
Lyrics- 4/5 ( good shit, probably would have stood out more with a better presence on the mic)
overall- 4/5- I liked this, just work on being more aggressive

[mykill]

Re: Artille - Hopes and Dreams (Remix)

Flow: B+
Lyrics: A

Overall: 3.5/5, The whole feeling within your delivery problem still exists. I like the lax style to this, but there are some words you can't hear from it. That reverb effect you use is a bit xtra, would be cool if you turned it down just a bit. Lyrically this track is solid. You picked a good beat to rhyme to that compliments your style as an artist. I like what you did here, but with some more experimenting you could start nailing things like this on the regular. Good job man.