J-Smooth- Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

[JSmooth]

I was recently working on my X's and O's mixtape but i've found some producers willing to work with me so I've decided to make an album. I'm calling it True Feelings and D.L.S. is one of the tracks that's gonna be on there. Check it out and leave feedback please.

Shout out to Koncept for producing and engineering this track

D.L.S.- LimeLinx - Preview - D.L.S..mp3


Feedback-
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post570082
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post570029

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: J-Smooth- Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

i got this beat too. i found it on youtube, where u get it??

also peep this>>>>>>>>> http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-the-tape.html

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

The producer who made the beat is named koncept and I went up to his studio and worked with him on my album and this is the beat that he came up with while i was there

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: J-Smooth- Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

dude named jarox is who i got it from.

i seen koncept on soundclick, but koncept and jarox are 2 different producers............ im pretty sure jarox is the producer though.

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listen @ around :30 seconds u can hear jarox tag on the beat, not koncept.

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

yea ur right. Jarox originally made the beat, but I had kon remake cuz I couldnt get in contact with the other dude...how u like the song though lol?

[Artille]

Re: J-Smooth- Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

Diezel seems right.... o_O

Regardless who produced the beat, the mixing/mastering is nice and this is a good song. Your flow was spot on and consistent. The chorus comes in a bit too loud I feel, but that gets overshadowed with the the great quality of the chorus. Lyrics were nice and stuck to the topic. This is a very high quality (professional) sounding track from you. Album should be great, except it's fucked your engineer stole that beat. Oh well...

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

I just talked to kon the beat on this particular version is jarox beat, but ive got a video of me and kon in the studio with him remaking the beat and tweaking it. This will not be the album version, but it is neary finished and once it is ill replace this version with the final

Artille- Thanks. Im really going for high quality music this whole album. I want my lyrics mastering producing etc to be top notch

[mykill]

Re: J-Smooth- Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

Flow: A
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4.25/5, There's something up with the verse mixing for the verses. I dont know if its a noise thing, but you might want to noise reduce that. A little popping and static here and there. Other than that mastering for this is really legit. Might wanna do some backing vocals or adlibs for the chorus. If it wasnt for the beat tempo change you wouldnt know it was a chorus. A doubling effect there would work too. Nice wordplay on this one. Good job J. Not much of anything I can add except nice work and if this is indicative of what you're album will be like then I'm sure you're gonna drop a classic.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: J-Smooth- Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

Diezel seems right.... o_O
.

OFCOURSE IM RIGHT. HOW DARE U DOUBT ME

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yea ur right. Jarox originally made the beat, but I had kon remake cuz I couldnt get in contact with the other dude...

damn why u had to lie from the start.

and yall stealing this nigga jarox beat and remakin it and shit.

not very moral of u jsmooth.

contrary to your music. ...............

I THINk u should do the right thing like spike lee instead of this dishonesty.

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

@mykill- Def appreciate the feedback. Ill check into fixing the mixing that ur talking about.

@Yung- nigga dont start lecturin me. I aint hidin shit. I had kon remake it and put his on flare on it, but i just posted the wrong version which is my bad.

[Tunechi2835]

Re: J-Smooth- Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

love the song bro !

[MC_Crary]

Re: J-Smooth- Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

You have a knack for making honest songs. That's the main thing I'm looking forward too from your album. You have the versatility to succeed, cause you make some bangers too. I have no real complaints about this track, except for maybe one slip up in the flow towards the last verse. Can't wait to hear the final version.