MC_Crary, Mykill, Artille - Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

[mykill]

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Download/Stream: Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...tml#post567526
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...tml#post566647

Machete Muzik 2, Artillery, MWO....ALL COMING SOON

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: MC_Crary, Mykill, Artille - Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

lmao, i died listenin to this. ...

i've give details in feedback for my next song.....

[Tha Professor]

Re: MC_Crary, Mykill, Artille - Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

oh shit, pretty tight. Artille callin out diezel? :O

4/5 i liked the song overall, not much to say about it

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: MC_Crary, Mykill, Artille - Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

Artille callin out diezel? :O

yeah i see u noticed it as well, lol

[mykill]

Re: MC_Crary, Mykill, Artille - Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

thx for checking it out Prof

[Artille]

Re: MC_Crary, Mykill, Artille - Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

Alright here's some feedback for you guys:

Mc_Crary
Flow: You used your classic Crary flow again on this one. It's not a bad thing, but I like seeing you do other flows more.
Lyrics: Kept to the Tony Montana theme/lifestyle. Some lines were spot on, some lines were casual, but it wasn't bad overall.
Other: It's hard to get past your quality sometimes, but I always do cause you're pretty good. Invest in a new mic and a pop filter.

Mykill
Flow: On point man, great job. You fit this beat perfectly!
Lyrics:
Other: Your quality was pretty nice, but there were a few times where it seemed too high. Mainly your "s"'s and such. Lower the volume a bit or adjust the Equalizer a bit.

Third guy sucks

[Konflikt]

Re: MC_Crary, Mykill, Artille - Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

I dont like the hook

1st guy: The record quality is quite hard to get past. The flow is nice, went of beat a couple times but nice. The lyrics are quite good.

2nd: Doesnt have as good a flow as no.1 but stays on beat alot more. Few nice lines in there too.

3rd: Best lyrics on the track. good flow but your voice seems uninterested.

[JSmooth]

Re: MC_Crary, Mykill, Artille - Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

mccrary
flow 4/5 loved the flow, seemed to imorive as ur verse went on
lyrics 3.5/5 good shit, i feel the same as artille about ur lyrics
overall 4/5 one of the better verses ive heard from u nice job

mykill
flow 3.5/5 very consistent which is nice. I hate inconsistency
lyrics 3.5/5 a few really good lines but at the same time there were some that seemed like fillers
overall 3.5/5 I like it, keep it up

Artille
flow- 3.5/5 I heard like one or 2 slip ups but nothing major
lyrics- 4.25/5 as konflict said best lyrics but they would def sound better with more passion in them
overall 4/5 I like it but like i said i would love to hear more passion from u

[Gibbsy]

Re: MC_Crary, Mykill, Artille - Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

Beat is tight!! some greezy homicdal sounding shit, the hook is kinda boring though to be honest, i feel the vibe though the first verse is nice lyrics are nice, flow is pretty tight too... all though it kinda falls in places sometimes ...2nd verse is nicee flow wise its tight. the lyrics are nice to all though i yall coulda gone harder in the delivery though i mean your talking about killing an shizz..but yall sound like your just chilling out
3rd verse is mehh...i dno the delivery on the last verse is definalty the worst cant really vibe with it but the lyrics are nice!! And the way the track ends is tight

overall guna say 3.5/5 if the delivery on the verses where better could easyly be a 5 though real talk..

[mykill]

Re: MC_Crary, Mykill, Artille - Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

Konz, JS, and Gibbsy - Thanks for checking this out

[JMSN]

Re: MC_Crary, Mykill, Artille - Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

1st Verse: Flow was alright, fell off quite a bit IMO. Lyrics- meh. pretty decent for the theme. but step em up!
2nd Verse: Flow was better than the first, but still not what I would like to hear on this type of beat. Lyrics-pretty good, nice punchlines.
3rd Verse: Flow was terrible, wasn't really on point at all. Lyrics-Pretty good, can tell you are influence heavily by wayne.

[mykill]

Re: MC_Crary, Mykill, Artille - Kill 'Em (Tony Montana)

Thanks for checking this out Mr. FTP.

The reason why there isnt an intense delivery on this is because we all tried to portray the more relaxed "Tony Montana" persona instead of the intense "ok, i'm reloaded!" one. Sorta like "we know we're badasses, we dont need to be too aggressive. We're just gonna lax and tell ya whats up". I had thought to do the delivery more aggressive, but this just seemed to work better. As far as people commenting on the hook being boring - I can see where you get that. It was the first thing that came to my head when hearing the beat so I ran with it. Not much different than Wiz on "Taylor Gang", but I can see how it could use some more livening up.

Again, thanks to everyone that checked this out.