One Big Room (my Gucci Gucci verse)

[SerjTank]

One big room full of bad bitches
used to have to pick em but now they come in batches
imma leanin motherfucker i can barely stand around you
id rather post up pick a bitch up off the menu
first in flight like my name was pifferelli
gotta thick ass bitch meat straight from the deli
east west south bitches all in a bungle
done seen so many titties needa learn how to juggle
kush in the blunt backpack full of felonies
and all my flags greened up like celeries
imma sip till i slurp
jig till i jerk
live in the party like that’s where i work
life is a beach but watch out for the tide
got my hands up till the end of the ride
so before you come and judge, cmon step inside
im good at everything but aint no way that i can hide this
*one big room full of bad bitches*

[ThaMothafuckinCarter]

Re: One Big Room (my Gucci Gucci verse)

decent verse imo. i rapped to the beat and it was pretty on point with the cadence off in some points but overall pretty good

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btw heres my verse to the same song. i used the same flow as K$ and i think its pretty on point.

One big room full of bad bitches
Im fuckin all the bitches, and im killin all the snitches
I leave em in the ditches, im spendin all my riches
Turn ur lights on and off im flippin all the switches
Yeah im the fuckin king and you can never take my crown
Kinda like jay-z because I fuckin run this town
Man your life is garbage, its like you work at target
Hurry up, gotta go, your blood stainin my carpet
Man hes satirical, on your track im lyrical
Yeah imma a fuckin god call my figure biblical
Call me if u need a bitch, call me if you need some food
See them fuckin preppy chicks, they gone think my shit so crude
Im in my whip cruising, my swag is fuckin straight
Teachin yall a lesson over there how to rap to this shit
Hotter than the sun and I do it all with leisure,
You bitches fuckin colder than my freezer

[SerjTank]

Re: One Big Room (my Gucci Gucci verse)

decent verse imo. i rapped to the beat and it was pretty on point with the cadence off in some points but overall pretty good

---------- Post added at 03:01 AM ---------- Previous post was at 02:59 AM ----------

btw heres my verse to the same song. i used the same flow as K$ and i think its pretty on point.

One big room full of bad bitches
Im fuckin all the bitches, and im killin all the snitches
I leave em in the ditches, im spendin all my riches
Turn ur lights on and off im flippin all the switches
Yeah im the fuckin king and you can never take my crown
Kinda like jay-z because I fuckin run this town
Man your life is garbage, its like you work at target
Hurry up, gotta go, your blood stainin my carpet
Man hes satirical, on your track im lyrical
Yeah imma a fuckin god call my figure biblical
Call me if u need a bitch, call me if you need some food
See them fuckin preppy chicks, they gone think my shit so crude
Im in my whip cruising, my swag is fuckin straight
Teachin yall a lesson over there how to rap to this shit
Hotter than the sun and I do it all with leisure,
You bitches fuckin colder than my freezer

this shits dope haha

[Kazi]

Re: One Big Room (my Gucci Gucci verse)

good shit, its pretty good tbh