J-Smooth- Stay With Me

[JSmooth]

Another track off my True Feelings Album which will hopefully be dropping late August. It features my nigga Jarren Johnson. Feedback is greatly appreciated. Go check out my other song off true feelings if u havent heard it yet. Its called Dream Like State (D.L.S.)

Stay With Me- http://hulkshare.com/1o6luinjngix

Feedback-
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post576486
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post576477

[Gibbsy]

Re: J-Smooth- Stay With Me

start off with saying beat is tight man!!! love it. and your intro reminds me of drake... your voice got a similar vibe to his ...real talk..
one thing i will say is where you cut silence your leaving a lil to much on at the beggining an you can hear the mic cuttin in an out..
but the flow is fucking tight !!! real talk lyrics are fire...I like the mastering on this an quality is tight man, this is deffo straight up fire man
5/5 not alot i can say in the way of whats rong with it, other than the cuts when your just talking

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Stay With Me

^^ thanks bruh. really appreciate the feedback. O and yea i had to serve the beat justice haha. Check out my other song if u ever get the time.

[mykill]

Re: J-Smooth- Stay With Me

says "file not found"

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Stay With Me

my bad. That might explain some things ha. Its fixed now though so u can check it out.


LINK IS FIXED EVERYONE

[MeezyBaby]

Re: J-Smooth- Stay With Me

Impressive!
Keep up the good work, I love the beat.

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Stay With Me

Impressive!
Keep up the good work, I love the beat.

preciate the feedback

[KidComet]

Re: J-Smooth- Stay With Me

Wow, Im impressed.
You got dope flow.

Do I hear a lil bit of autotune in ur adlibs?

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Stay With Me

^^Thanks a lot and yea theres a little bit in there. I thought it made it sound a lil better

[BlakeJay]

Re: J-Smooth- Stay With Me

you're good at these "honesty" tracks..got a good flow a ride the beat well..glad to see ya not just another rapper spittin random metaphors..your songs have alot of replay value as well.. 4.4/5

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Stay With Me

you're good at these "honesty" tracks..got a good flow a ride the beat well..glad to see ya not just another rapper spittin random metaphors..your songs have alot of replay value as well.. 4.4/5

Thanks a lot bro and yea i was wondering if people were listening to my songs more than once so im glad someone talked about the replay value. Preciate it.

[MC_Crary]

Re: J-Smooth- Stay With Me

That chauffeur line is nasty dude lol, like the way you played that one. This true feelings album is sounding like its gonna be hot. I don't feel like there's any critiquing to give this. 5 of 5.