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Re: Real Eyes, Realize, Real Lies-Mr. FTP
This was a solid 16 it just could've used some work. The opening lines were kinda awkward to me "short like a midget" is probably the most simple simile I've ever heard you use. The heaven sent line could've been better too. The reverb was kinda high on the adlibs which also threw the song off, but I can see where your mastering has improved. Your flow has definitely grown also. Good track to return with just could've used a bit more work.
This was a solid 16 it just could've used some work. The opening lines were kinda awkward to me "short like a midget" is probably the most simple simile I've ever heard you use. The heaven sent line could've been better too. The reverb was kinda high on the adlibs which also threw the song off, but I can see where your mastering has improved. Your flow has definitely grown also. Good track to return with just could've used a bit more work.
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