Kid Comet- Like Me then Hate Me (Original) (Prod. By All Rounda Productions)

[KidComet]

please be harsh, i need feedback and criticism, dont be pussyfooting me.

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[mykill]

Re: Kid Comet- Like Me then Hate Me (Original) (Prod. By All Rounda Productions)

Flow: B+
Lyrics: C-

Overall: 3/5, Some very very weak punches in this. I have to say, you have great presence on the mic and pretty good delivery. But when it comes to lyrics, you are lacking. The hook isnt that bad. It works, even in a lyrical sense. There are few slip ups in the flow department, but you are able to pick up very well. Good beat selection though, it compliments your style well. Again, you gotta diversify what you say on the mic. If you are looking to expand lyrically, you gotta pay more attention to wordplay and just general vocabulary. You got the rhyming part down, that's beyond apparent, but you need to be more versitile telling your stories. Instead of saying "I gotta keep going" think of 5 ways you can say that without using the same words. "Never going to quit" "Can't stop, won't stop" "There's no end to my grind" etc etc, and then that will diversify your lyrics and keep them from sounding plain jane.

[KidComet]

Re: Kid Comet- Like Me then Hate Me (Original) (Prod. By All Rounda Productions)

Flow: B+
Lyrics: C-

Overall: 3/5, Some very very weak punches in this. I have to say, you have great presence on the mic and pretty good delivery. But when it comes to lyrics, you are lacking. The hook isnt that bad. It works, even in a lyrical sense. There are few slip ups in the flow department, but you are able to pick up very well. Good beat selection though, it compliments your style well. Again, you gotta diversify what you say on the mic. If you are looking to expand lyrically, you gotta pay more attention to wordplay and just general vocabulary. You got the rhyming part down, that's beyond apparent, but you need to be more versitile telling your stories. Instead of saying "I gotta keep going" think of 5 ways you can say that without using the same words. "Never going to quit" "Can't stop, won't stop" "There's no end to my grind" etc etc, and then that will diversify your lyrics and keep them from sounding plain jane.

Preciate your advice man.
It helps a lot.

Ima release something tonight and Ima try to get my lyricism up

[BlakeJay]

Re: Kid Comet- Like Me then Hate Me (Original) (Prod. By All Rounda Productions)

Ill give this a 3.5/5...like i said be4 switch the flow up a lil bit more..some of your lines were a little predictable, like i knew what u were gonna say be4 u said it..u have talent though..just think outside the box a lil bit more and ull be fine i heard a couple real meaningful lines in there..gotta let those shine a lil more..ill be waitin to hear ya new stuff

[KidComet]

Re: Kid Comet- Like Me then Hate Me (Original) (Prod. By All Rounda Productions)

Ill give this a 3.5/5...like i said be4 switch the flow up a lil bit more..some of your lines were a little predictable, like i knew what u were gonna say be4 u said it..u have talent though..just think outside the box a lil bit more and ull be fine i heard a couple real meaningful lines in there..gotta let those shine a lil more..ill be waitin to hear ya new stuff

Thanks brooski

[JSmooth]

Re: Kid Comet- Like Me then Hate Me (Original) (Prod. By All Rounda Productions)

Flow- B
Lyrics D+
overall- C+
U def sound really comfortable on the mic and thats somethin A LOT of rappers lack but like some people have said ur lyrics r really lacking. That can be fixed though. Just put more thought into what u really wanna say. Also the flow started ti get a little boring so changing it up, even just a little, will def make u a lot better. Good job though