J-Smooth- Justin's Room (Marvin's Room Remix)

[JSmooth]

Just a little promo for my True Feelings album. I put this together very quickly, so no mastering or mixing really. I think it's still kinda hot though. I try singing a little so lmk how that sounds. I call some people out on here but there local so obviously no one is gonna know who they are hah.

I'll drop another song off my album in a day or so if i can get some feedback on either this song, "D.L.S.", or "Stay With Me". Appreciate it.

Justin's Room- LimeLinx - Preview - Justin's%20Room.mp3

Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post584570
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post584563

[KidComet]

Re: J-Smooth- Justin's Room (Marvin's Room Remix)

Wow

Bro you got your shit on youtube?

"Even though its crowded I had to get in marvins room"

haha referring to the point that so many remixes were made right?

Your flow was on point like hell!
Lyrics really made me start nodding
Good shit. 10/10 hands down.

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Justin's Room (Marvin's Room Remix)

Wow

Bro you got your shit on youtube?

"Even though its crowded I had to get in marvins room"

haha referring to the point that so many remixes were made right?

Your flow was on point like hell!
Lyrics really made me start nodding
Good shit. 10/10 hands down.

No i dont have it on youtube, but i really need to get on that.

And yea that's what it meant. I wanted to come up with a creative way to address the fact that EVERYONE has hopped on this beat ha
Really appreciate the feedback though. I might be posting another song tonight, so be on the lookout for that

[MC_Crary]

Re: J-Smooth- Justin's Room (Marvin's Room Remix)

Let me first say I hate this beat. Mainly because everybody's been on it. But i usually like everything you do. The singing isn't too bad actually. Not expecting an r&b album from you or anything but it fits. Your quality is great compared to most of the guys around. Don't know who you're aiming at in the last verse but you killed it. This is probably my favorite take on this song.

[oana_05]

Re: J-Smooth- Justin's Room (Marvin's Room Remix)

Justin's Room- LimeLinx - Preview - Justin's%20Room.mp3

It's really amazing, good job!

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Justin's Room (Marvin's Room Remix)

Let me first say I hate this beat. Mainly because everybody's been on it. But i usually like everything you do. The singing isn't too bad actually. Not expecting an r&b album from you or anything but it fits. Your quality is great compared to most of the guys around. Don't know who you're aiming at in the last verse but you killed it. This is probably my favorite take on this song.

Yea i was a little worried about getting on a beat that so many people had done so i tried a different approach. "This is probably my favorite take on the song" Thanks a lot for that bruh

[ProBitaz.]

Re: J-Smooth- Justin's Room (Marvin's Room Remix)

Bro you're dope! Why haven't I listened to you yet? The singin' is great too.

5/5 - One of the best remixes out there.

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Justin's Room (Marvin's Room Remix)

Thanks bruh! ive posted a bunch of songs on here so check em out! better late than never ha, but yea preciate the feedback

[mykill]

Re: J-Smooth- Justin's Room (Marvin's Room Remix)

Flow: A-
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4.25/5, Not bad at all man. Good job! There's a few moments where your flow slips off. I like how you twisted this around and made it your own. Mastering on this sounds good as well. The acapella outro was pretty strong as well. Nice work!

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Justin's Room (Marvin's Room Remix)

Flow: A-
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4.25/5, Not bad at all man. Good job! There's a few moments where your flow slips off. I like how you twisted this around and made it your own. Mastering on this sounds good as well. The acapella outro was pretty strong as well. Nice work!

Thanks for the listen and feedback, nice to hear