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    This is ROC-9 of REALSPIT. Please leave feedback.

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  • #2
    Re: I Do It - REALSPIT

    Flow: A
    Lyrics: A

    Overall: 4/5, Mastering on the hook sounds real nice. I like the hook too. Vocal mastering is on par as well. Beat seems a bit amateur, but still good though. Lyrics are both written well and spit well. Roc sounds pretty good on the mic. Who produced the beat? Nothing else really I can comment on this except nice work, keep posting on here so we can get a better picture of you as an artists, and thanks for posting!

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    • #3
      Re: I Do It - REALSPIT

      It was produced by a friend, he's just getting into making beats. Thanks for your feedback!
      "The Peace Sign Is Just A Trigger And A Middle Finger"

      - Lil Wayne (4 My Town)

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      • #4
        Re: I Do It - REALSPIT

        Alright, you obviously have a good grasp on rap technique. Your quality/mixing is nice and there are no flaws in your flow/delivery but right now you're frontin on some fake Big Sean bullshit. Your lyrics were extremely average and the whole song was just boring. If you want to keep this style either step it up lyrically or try to experiment with some different things.

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        • #5
          Re: I Do It - REALSPIT

          Decent song! ill give it a 3.8/5. Lyrics and flow were pretty good overall. I can tell you can do better though

          ---------- Post added at 05:52 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:51 PM ----------

          Originally posted by Sentus View Post
          Alright, you obviously have a good grasp on rap technique. Your quality/mixing is nice and there are no flaws in your flow/delivery but right now you're frontin on some fake Big Sean bullshit. Your lyrics were extremely average and the whole song was just boring. If you want to keep this style either step it up lyrically or try to experiment with some different things.
          i like how u give honest feedback. can u give feedback on mine http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ies-books.html

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