Blanco - Attention Feat. Envy + Snippets

[cardenas4o9]

Sup everybody i really needed to make this thread just to say that im looking for a team. I need somebody thats really good at graphics to help me make mixtape covers and edit photos just to make them look more professional. And i also need somebody thats really active on the internet hopefully on alot of forums and blogs to help me promote my music. I dont really have time for promotion because im either working, going to school, or recording. I have a looooot of material (enough for 4 mixtapes and counting) so dont think im not putting in work. I cant pay anybody right now but hopefully youll see this as more of a partnership to make it big. I have alot of faith that im good enough to make it and if you agree then join me..

Attention.mp3 - 7.84MB

New Snippets.mp3 - 9.79MB

feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...y-montana.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...es-mr-ftp.html

[JSmooth]

Re: Blanco - Attention Feat. Envy + Snippets

Flow- 4/5 Nice presence on the mic and u rode the beat well
Lyrics- 4/5 had some really good lyrics but sometimes they felt a little basic. nothing too major though
Overall- 4/5 Nice track. Really good recording quality. Keep postin

[mykill]

Re: Blanco - Attention Feat. Envy + Snippets

Flow: A
Lyrics: A+

Overall: 4/5, Hook's nice. Mastered real well too. What happened to the "K" and the "Lil" in ya name? Guess we're on our grown man shyt then lol. Bars are great and delivered flawlessly. But then again, I always know what to expect when Blanco drops a track right? lol. I'm not as into this song as one could be, but I can see the inklings of mass appeal that come from it. If this is indicative of the "work" you've been putting in, you got something really amazing on your hands.

If you're looking for someone for promotion, there are a lot of Promotion companies that can do promotion for you on like twitter, youtube, etc. Even get you followers for your twitter. Prices are reasonable, something like $50 for about a week of promotion of various outlets. It's essentially spamming the hell outta people, but it gets your name out and if you're not out doing shows and promoting yourself, its a good way to get things going. Also, another good way to get some publicity is to get a DJ to "host" your tape. Makes it seem more official in some people's eyes and also another avenue to get you some promotion. Why do you think ppl like Drama and Ill Will get so much money? Getting PAID to host mixtapes for people. I think you can look around and find some on twitter that'll do it for $50, but who knows. PM me with your graphics needs and I can see what I can do. I do a lotta graphic design stuff for ppl and I do it for free, so if you want msg me and I'll see what I can do.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Blanco - Attention Feat. Envy + Snippets

you're actually really good.

the only problem is you dont stand out. like you've mastered rapping, but after listening to the snippets, and this song, nothing is really standing out, and poppin to me. u got alotta nice lines, but it gets boring, and its seems generic wit no direction. just alotta punchlines and shit.

but you're really good though.

also do u really have a daughter?

[cardenas4o9]

Re: Blanco - Attention Feat. Envy + Snippets

Thanks for the feedback and mykill i really love your info man you really help out alot more than we all deserve and i appreciate it. and thanks chuckie i understand what you mean and i kind of do that on purpose. i feel like these types of songs would help me gain more fans and then when i had enough attention i would be free to be more personal and meaningful with my lyrics. and yea i got a four month old daughter lol why

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Blanco - Attention Feat. Envy + Snippets

its gonna be hard as fuck trynna rap and take care of a family while working and going to school in todays times. especially a rapper starting out.
most of the time one thing or the other is gonna be neglected.
good luck though

flow - 4.5/5

lyrics - 4/5

overal 4/5 - nice lines , but song seemed generic.

[cardenas4o9]

Re: Blanco - Attention Feat. Envy + Snippets

Yea thats why i recorded as much material as i could during the summer so i could continuously drop it while im in school. i know its gonna be hard but im the type of person that wouldnt be able to die satisfied if i know i didnt try as hard as i could.

[Sentus]

Re: Blanco - Attention Feat. Envy + Snippets

I can't decide if I love the beat or hate it. Your flow was good throughout the whole song, I didn't really like it that much. Really slow flows just sound awkward to me. Your delivery and quality are great as always, that's why I think you have much more potential than you're reaching. "With me you've got no hands, you can't hang." Ewww, no. You could do so much more with your songs than this.

[mykill]

Re: Blanco - Attention Feat. Envy + Snippets

GETZ IT OUT MARKETING GROUP

this is the kinda thing I was talking about. They'll do a variety of things for an artist, for a price of course, but they should get you the kind of exposure you want. Nothing really speaks more volumes for getting noticed and getting people to listen other than finding people and performing for them and getting them to tell someone else, and so forth. If you see a show of some kinda that you think you can get on, get on it. Go there, perform, hang out and pass out CDs of your stuff, and make sure they remember who you are and why you're there, because that kind of connection is what gets ppl talking and gets people to spread the word. Peace

[MC_Crary]

Re: Blanco - Attention Feat. Envy + Snippets

Get up off my cockpit/ i got a new rider every time the glock tick/ no rock shit, but if you on my jock tip/the find your body at the bottom of a mosh pit

Incredible man. It's good to have you back, I can't really offer any help in the way that you're looking for because I'm looking for the same thing myself. But I can say that I see you doing big things bro and I hope the best for you. Hopefully we can do more work in the future.

[cardenas4o9]

Re: Blanco - Attention Feat. Envy + Snippets

appreciate all the feedback especially you mykill for hookin me up with that info