BlakeJay - "Histories Books"

[BlakeJay]

This is my newest song ive recently recored. I hope you gyus enjoy it. It's called "Histories Books"

http://hulkshare.com/xs1i43qy5ht6

btw follow me on Twitter (will follow back) and Retweet the song if you like it. Thanks in advance

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*This thread will be stickied for about a week!

Official Cover


Props to WIC on the cover once again!

[mykill]

Re: BlakeJay - "Histories Books"

Flow: A
Lyrics: A+++

Overall: 5/5, Effects on this one are pretty cool. Work well. Might need a bit better vocal recording work. You doing it in a big space? Or is just the reverb on it that makes it sound that way. Lyrics blow anything and everything else way. That acapella fast choppin' is insane. Jay, u got it.

[JSmooth]

Re: BlakeJay - "Histories Books"

Flow-4/5 great for the most part but there were very small slip ups and imo the transition to the acapella was a little awkward
Lyrics- 5/5 wow, lyrics were fucking crazy. no complaints in this category
Overall- 4.5/5 Really good track. like mykill said maybe a little better vocal recording but def keep doin what u doin

[KidComet]

Re: BlakeJay - "Histories Books"

Bro. Wow.
Ima go get a joint and light it up and smoke it, and listen to this track on repeat ok?
It's so chill man.

I personally didnt catch any slip ups in your flow as stated above.

The only complaint was that the transition(as stated above) was indeed a little... random? Like you shouldve let the beat drop I guess.

[ProBitaz.]

Re: BlakeJay - "Histories Books"

Why is this stickied, lol?

O well, I'll take a listen...

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Beat's chill, I like it.

Lyrics and flow is crazy! Amazin' song bro!

[kfadahunsi]

Re: BlakeJay - "Histories Books"

i thought it was gonna be shit but, i honestly liked it.... good job

[WeezYIsCraaazY]

Re: BlakeJay - "Histories Books"

Ahhhhhh, Shit.
Sorry, Bro.

Still Want The Cover?

Great Song, By The Way.
4.6/5.

[BlakeJay]

Re: BlakeJay - "Histories Books"

Flow: A
Lyrics: A+++

Overall: 5/5, Effects on this one are pretty cool. Work well. Might need a bit better vocal recording work. You doing it in a big space? Or is just the reverb on it that makes it sound that way. Lyrics blow anything and everything else way. That acapella fast choppin' is insane. Jay, u got it.

Yeah i know the vocal recording needs work..im not in the best place to record (a closet) with not much else but the mic and popfilter..hopefully i can get it better though thanks for the feedback though

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Flow-4/5 great for the most part but there were very small slip ups and imo the transition to the acapella was a little awkward
Lyrics- 5/5 wow, lyrics were fucking crazy. no complaints in this category
Overall- 4.5/5 Really good track. like mykill said maybe a little better vocal recording but def keep doin what u doin

Yeah i also noticed that it was akward how it went right to the acapella lls i got kinda lazy and didnt fix it..thanks for calln me out on it..thanks for the feedback

[mykill]

Re: BlakeJay - "Histories Books"

I understand how that is. I'm in an open living room recording all the time, so I dont even have the luxury of a closet or a bathroom lol. But it still sounds great man. And again, it could just need the reverb turned down a touch. Try it and see.

BTW, how did this get stickied? lol

[BlakeJay]

Re: BlakeJay - "Histories Books"

Bro. Wow.
Ima go get a joint and light it up and smoke it, and listen to this track on repeat ok?
It's so chill man.

I personally didnt catch any slip ups in your flow as stated above.

The only complaint was that the transition(as stated above) was indeed a little... random? Like you shouldve let the beat drop I guess.

lol yeah i know the transition was bad..i just did it at the wrong point and got lazy and didnt fix it..thanks for the feedback

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I understand how that is. I'm in an open living room recording all the time, so I dont even have the luxury of a closet or a bathroom lol. But it still sounds great man. And again, it could just need the reverb turned down a touch. Try it and see.

BTW, how did this get stickied? lol

This thread is stickied because i won the lil cypher we had here about a month ago..and the reward was i get one of my threads stickied for a week

[mykill]

Re: BlakeJay - "Histories Books"

This thread is stickied because i won the lil cypher we had here about a month ago..and the reward was i get one of my threads stickied for a week

oh.....like this one?

[BlakeJay]

Re: BlakeJay - "Histories Books"

i thought it was gonna be shit but, i honestly liked it.... good job

thank you for taking a listen