Kid Comet-Sure thing Freeverse, (Do you think my gf will like this?)

[KidComet]

Yeah, my girlfriends bday is on august 1st but I'm like 30000 miles away from her on vacation,
So I'm just gonna give her a virtual present... for now (;


Sure thingidkwtfalol by Deion James on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

Note: Don't judge me on the lyrics on anything, there my usual kleshay ass lyrics.
I just want to know if you think she would like, or does it sound like I'm crying throughout the whole the track, cause I think I do. Just need some second opinions.

I really suggest people to get a soundcloud. Its basically Twitter for artist.
You can follow other people, and when they upload a track, it shows on your wall, its pretty cool.
And its an easy way to organize all ur music online.

Feed:http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ies-books.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ou-let-me.html

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Kid Comet-Sure thing Freeverse, (Do you think my gf will like this?)

Doesnt matter what we think. If u think its hot, its hot.

[KidComet]

Re: Kid Comet-Sure thing Freeverse, (Do you think my gf will like this?)

Doesnt matter what we think. If u think its hot, its hot.

Omg, thank you for the good feedback bro.
Love it.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Kid Comet-Sure thing Freeverse, (Do you think my gf will like this?)

Omg, thank you for the good feedback bro.
Love it.

nah that wasnt feedback yet, its loading, im bout to listen now and give the feedback.

[ATLien666]

Re: Kid Comet-Sure thing Freeverse, (Do you think my gf will like this?)

lol, when it comes to girls, you can put out terrible songs and they'll love it, but this is pretty good.

Lyrics: You're obviously in love, cute lyrics for you and your girlfriend. But I would keep it to just her, no offense, mainly because this is a song just meant for her. 4/5

Flow: At times it sounds like whining, but it was on point. Just no more whining, it sounds like Rebirth-era wayne. 3/5

Overall - 3/5

[KidComet]

Re: Kid Comet-Sure thing Freeverse, (Do you think my gf will like this?)

lol, when it comes to girls, you can put out terrible songs and they'll love it, but this is pretty good.

Lyrics: You're obviously in love, cute lyrics for you and your girlfriend. But I would keep it to just her, no offense, mainly because this is a song just meant for her. 4/5

Flow: At times it sounds like whining, but it was on point. Just no more whining, it sounds like Rebirth-era wayne. 3/5

Overall - 3/5

Got ya thanks man.

I was gonna post it on my facebook, but nvmmm, gonna go to her inbox haha

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Kid Comet-Sure thing Freeverse, (Do you think my gf will like this?)

just listend to it.

yeah it works , and its from the heart. also she'll like it becuz yall together and ish.
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[KidComet]

Re: Kid Comet-Sure thing Freeverse, (Do you think my gf will like this?)

just listend to it.

yeah it works , and its from the heart. also she'll like it becuz yall together and ish.

o___O

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Kid Comet-Sure thing Freeverse, (Do you think my gf will like this?)

o___O

also good u didnt even fuck wit autotune.
im trynna do some tracks without autotune, cuz i always use dat shit

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: Kid Comet-Sure thing Freeverse, (Do you think my gf will like this?)

i agree with ATLien in that at some spots it can sound whiney but thats alright cause its a personal song.

also the lyrics are solid for a song for your girl. i used to write for my girl and its not always about gettin the metaphors and shit down as it is about getting your message across, which you did. so props for that.

hope she likes it man