Sentus- The Funeral

[Sentus]

Went with a new style. Show it to your friends, post it on your facebook, anything will help.

http://www.facebook.com/SentusMusic7

http://hulkshare.com/ubr0acvrf3s1



http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-snippets.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...mad-world.html

[MC_Crary]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

This beat is immaculate first of all. Great choice, it fits your style well. Everyone knows your probably the best lyricist around, but you even matched it with the flow on this one. You're growing as an artist rapidly. This is a great song man. No complaints. Keep up the great work.

edit:the forgot his keys line is the only slip up in the flow.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

this is actually dope bro. if u had a better mic presence it would be more dope though. also the echo effect is off a little.

[mykill]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

Flow: A-
Lyrics: A+

Overall: 4.25/5, I like this. Like I said on "Zip and a Double Cup" it seems you finally broke that flow that has kept you from performing well on differing beats. The effects on the "good enough for me/you" seem like their off, maybe the delay is too quick. A few more slips here and there on flow, but nothing where it makes ya cringe or is too noticeable. This song going to be on your EP? Fix that delay thing and this shit would be great for it. Great beat choice too. Nice work man.

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

Thanks for all the feed guys, it really means a lot. And no, this isn't going to be on the tape. All the songs on the tape will be me and Cole.


I put a lot of work into this song guys, so check it out!!

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

It's official, I've artisticlly surpassed this site's tolerance.

[yungfamou5]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

lol i just got done commenting on your and mykills song......r you droppin a mixtape in the future?

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

It's official, I've artisticlly surpassed this site's tolerance.

how can u surpass a site's tolerance of art ???? smh

drop more than one song of this caliber, then talk shit.......

[Coleon]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

Idk man you kind of bit Ice Killa's style on this one.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

idk man you kind of bit ice killa's style on this one.

link???

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

link???

He was being sarcastic you dumbfuck. Drop one song ever with any artistic depth and then talk shit. Troll.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

He was being sarcastic you dumbfuck. Drop one song ever with any artistic depth and then talk shit. Troll.

looks like i hit a nerve

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Drop one song ever with any artistic depth and then talk shit. Troll.

i actually have tons of songs wit artistic depth, but im not droppin songs till i get my mixing skills up. your echo/delay is off beat.

u should fix that, becuz this is a good song, but that fucks up the flow of it.