Sentus- The Funeral

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

Flow - Love the flow! This and your double time flow are the best.
Lyrics - Always fire! I love how you tell a 'lil story in this. We need more of this on this site ha.
Other - Love the aggressive, but smooth voice on this. Love the effects too, I think they worked good.
Overall - 4.5/5.

[JSmooth]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

flow 4/5 ur flow has def improved. nice job
lyrics 4.5/5 same as usual which is a good thing
overall 4/5 good song but idk i got bored like halfway through the song. It didnt pull me in

[SerjTank]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

Loved this beat, definitely good to cruise to and the flow was pretty smooth too.
could have been more enthusiastic though

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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He was being sarcastic you dumbfuck. Drop one song ever with any artistic depth and then talk shit. Troll.

how was i suppose to know he was bein sarcastic when i never even heard of ice killa??

thats why i asked for a link......

[Coleon]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

how was i suppose to know he was bein sarcastic when i never even heard of ice killa??

thats why i asked for a link......

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

feedback:

immediately liked the beat after a few seconds in from the start.
flow is good, and a good break from your usual flow that u use in all ya other songs.

hook is nice. but delay effect is offbeat.

overall, congrats on finally executing a full song and hook of your own.
and this beat is dope as fuck.
stuffy nose voice is more controlled, kinda noticeable, but it works in this.

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

the instrumental is so ill on this one. very dark and deep and emotional.

your hook is ill too. definitely think your second verse was better but overall its definitely a 4.2/5

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

i would appreciate if u could leave some feedback on my MIXING/MASTERING VOCAL QUALITY ON THE BEAT thanks here's the link

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ing-test2.html

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

Thanks for listening everyone, I'll do real songs like this when I start recording again

[SiLeNcEd]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

Sounds sick, flow is great, I love the style, it's like a Immortal Technique style.
Flow, 5/5
Lyrics, 5/5
Style, 4/5, I really don't like Immortal Technique's style, but it still sounds good.

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

You're Next...

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- The Funeral

You're Next...

ermmmm wat?