An Eye For An Eye

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Haven't recorded in a while due to a lack of a mic but I was tired of writing and figured I'd just record and make a debut here for the hell of it.

So, yes, this is without an adequate mic and basically just using my mic on my Mac. But regardless I wanted to post.

So anyway this is just the first verse but the second one is coming when I get a chance to record it.

An Eye For An Eye.mp3 - 4.3 MB

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[Jewazi]

Re: An Eye For An Eye

Got the lyrics?

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: An Eye For An Eye

Lyrics:

[Kush]
This verse came straight from the kush
We wouldn't have had a problem if you'd just bothered to look
Probably the fact that you had other muthafuckas in your little black book added to the fact that we were strugglin, I can't believe I even shook
This dirty muthafuckas hand, how could you even live with yourself? How could you live with Stan?
He got a 7 year old kid right? and Damn
He didn't even mention his wife
How the fuck he supposed to raise his kid?
When he's fuckin bitches that aint even his
He got swinger parties left and right inside of his crib
And man i don't even know what all been covered in his jizz
But that aint me I aint all in they biz
I used to be in yours but you got all this shit
Thats fucked up your head that you need to deal with
And yeah, yo pussy was tight and yeah, yo head was the shit
But I got bitches that wont stop beggin me for my dick
F.U. boo, but i'm white so i don't shop there.
Got Gucci on my belt, Louis Vuitton on my derriere
What, you didn't think that they made underwear?
Well maybe if you aired out your dirty laundry
You'd find a pair in there next to an overused condom
Moment of silence for the babies lost in those rubber pieces of shit
And I never wrapped it when I hit

[mykill]

Re: An Eye For An Eye

Flow: B-
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 3.5/5, For a mic off a MAC, this aint too bad. Sometimes the autotune drowns out the vocals. You seem to have stayed on beat pretty well throughout this and the concept seems to work well. Welcome to tha Studio. Don't forget to check out our latest Cypher thread -> HERE.

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: An Eye For An Eye

Flow: B-
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 3.5/5, For a mic off a MAC, this aint too bad. Sometimes the autotune drowns out the vocals. You seem to have stayed on beat pretty well throughout this and the concept seems to work well. Welcome to tha Studio. Don't forget to check out our latest Cypher thread -> HERE.

thanks for the feedback. yeah i hate not having a mic and i hated not recording. mine got fucked up when i moved into my apartment.

but yeah i'll check out the cypher.