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  • VAiN - Come Back

    Still no mic, but just was in the mood to record.

    Hooks are pretty rough, still might need to redo them. And the syncing for the ending is a little off but other than that

    Hulkshare.com Come Back.mp3

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ump-remix.html
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-let-me-2.html

    [Lyrics]

    Intro:
    It'd be easy if you never [Come Back]
    Even if I need for you to [Come Back]
    It'd drive me crazy if you ever [Come Back]
    But i'd be just as crazy if you didn't [Come Back]
    Half of me is screamin' don't [Come Back]
    The other half is whisperin' I wish you would [Come Back]
    Just stay away and don't try to [Come Back]
    I'm so lost why can't you just [Come Back]
    How can I forget you if you [Come Back]
    Why would I even try to forget ya if ya [Come Back]
    Why would I even try to forget ya if ya [Come Back]
    Just stop tryin to [Come Back]
    No, don't ever stop tryin to [Come Back]
    Even if I need for you to [Come Back]
    I pray to God that you don't [Come Back]
    Uh, uh, uh, uh, uh, ugh, even if i can't forget you
    How can I forget you if ya

    [Verse 1]
    Cause if ya thinkin' about comin' back around here
    Recognize that old feelings still exist here
    Up and down the street
    Up and down the beat of my heart, up and down the roads that we had to part
    I'm just sittin in this seat, drink my iced tea, got it somethin spicy, that's prolly i'm feelin nicely
    Ugh, fuck i'm drunk, gotta sober up,
    Cops comin' round the corner
    So I gotta load her up
    Drop the seat back in my ride
    Close the trunk
    Layin' lazy on the pedal so I'm feelin' like i'm flyin'
    Wavin' bye cause I'm feelin' like I'm dyin'
    Can't mistake the feelings that I'm tryin to cover up
    Cause girl when I told you that I'd love you forever
    I meant it even though it seems like it was worse more times than it was better
    But if you can find it in yourself to look at the good
    I can find it in myself to say the things that I probably should have
    I would have, I could have, but I didn't
    And now it's like if I say it I won't feel like I meant it
    So that's why I say I hope you never try to Come Back
    Cause if you did it'd end up bringing all those fuzzy feelings back

    [Chorus]
    I can't really tell if this is what I want
    All I know is what I had before
    And all I know is that I'm open for more
    I'm open for more
    Even if that means more pain
    That also means that is means more gain
    And I don't know why we feel ashamed
    I'm open for more if you came back

    [Verse 2]
    So now I try to get by without the thoughts of a guy
    Who let the perfect person slip by
    Bye, bye, that's all I ever had to say
    And all we ever had was the perfect way
    And all we ever did were the perfect things
    I remember it like it was almost yesterday
    And I wish I had it tomorrow to
    Have somethin to look forward to
    Cause I remember back when we were together
    I always had somethin to look forward to
    Even if it was the worst day of my life
    You always seemed to come through
    Fuck, I almost spent this whole verse reminiscing
    I wrote this song with the intentions
    Of comin' up with reasons that I don't want for you to come back
    But now I just can't seem to get my brain to stop tryin' to mention
    All the things we did, all the words we said
    All the secrets we kept, all the love we had
    And all the pain I felt when I finally pulled the plug
    The monitor shut off and that shit was done
    And I realized at the last minute
    That the turmoil was worth all of the good feelings

    [Chorus]

    [Outro]
    But if you ever did come back
    I can't say that it would be all bad
    I only know that now
    i'm scared of what i found
    And scared of what I'd have to do
    If you ever came back


  • #2
    Re: VAiN - Come Back

    holy shit dude... you have an amazing flow...the intro bugged me but i understood why you had it....AMAZING FLOW no joke man

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    • #3
      Re: VAiN - Come Back

      Keep up the good work bra

      #KnuckIfYouBuckBoiii




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      • #4
        Re: VAiN - Come Back

        flow- 4.2/5 nice chill flow, not to much to complain about... i think the verse1 flow seemed better though
        lyrics- 3.8/5 nice kind of storytelling lyrics. pretty good
        overall- 4/5 pretty solid track. I didnt like the chorus though
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        • #5
          Re: VAiN - Come Back

          Originally posted by JSmooth View Post
          flow- 4.2/5 nice chill flow, not to much to complain about... i think the verse1 flow seemed better though
          lyrics- 3.8/5 nice kind of storytelling lyrics. pretty good
          overall- 4/5 pretty solid track. I didnt like the chorus though
          yeah i'm not much of a fan of the chorus myself either.

          thanks for the feedback!

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