Sentus- Think Twice Freestyle

[Sentus]

This was a promo track I did for ThisMeansWar Records
‪ThisMeansWarRecords's Channel‬‏ - YouTube


http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post592596

[cardenas4o9]

Re: Sentus- Think Twice Freestyle

Shit is crazy you got great lyrics and cool rhyme schemes. the only thing that doesnt feel right is your voice. it sounds kinda awkward and obviously your mastering could be better. but those two things are something that i believe will get better after more experience, like it did with me. 4.25/5
p.s. was this really a freestyle like off of the dome? i ask because i label all of my songs without a hook/chorus a freestyle, even though i think my shit out

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Sentus- Think Twice Freestyle

your lyrics are great, but your voice sucks ass. fuck man, u would make a good ghostwriter.

[JSmooth]

Re: Sentus- Think Twice Freestyle

Flow- 4/5 for the most part u rode the beat but imo some parts seemed kind of awkward. im bein picky though
lyrics- 4/5 u had some sick lines
overall- 4/5 good song but yea try changing ur voice up. u sound the same on all of ur songs

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- Think Twice Freestyle

Thanks for listening. ^^^^I can't change my voice...I think you meant to put delivery.

[mykill]

Re: Sentus- Think Twice Freestyle

Flow: A-
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4/5, You and Co' got some serious old school hip-hop jones dont you? Flow's a notch away from perfect and lyrics are all gravy and smooth. It's no Zip and A or Kush, but still another solid offering from 1/2 of the Pyromaniacs. Kudos.

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- Think Twice Freestyle

Thanks for listening and yeah, I just try to do all sorts of songs on different styles. Hip-Hop is art and I'm sure as hell going to use every color.

[mykill]

Re: Sentus- Think Twice Freestyle

Thanks for listening and yeah, I just try to do all sorts of songs on different styles. Hip-Hop is art and I'm sure as hell going to use every color.

i heard that mane. Sentus for President.

[SerjTank]

Re: Sentus- Think Twice Freestyle

This was pretty dope, the flow added to the lyricism shining out.
And I liked the Eminem-like "nothing rhymes with orange" bit
wish you went in longer though

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Sentus- Think Twice Freestyle

meh, it was aight.
u be soundin like a bitch sometimes though.

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i would appreciate if u could leave some feedback on my MIXING/MASTERING VOCAL QUALITY ON THE BEAT thanks here's the link

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ing-test2.html