Making Headlines - The Cruise EP Intro

[broc717]

Making Headlines - Broc - The Cruise EP out soon!

intro to my EP coming realllllllllllllllll soon

feedback
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...r-16-bars.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-freetyle.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post594489

[mykill]

Re: Making Headlines - The Cruise EP Intro

most slept on rapper in tha Stu'. more people need to show em some love

[broc717]

Re: Making Headlines - The Cruise EP Intro

Appreciate it potnah thanks for takin time to check it

[Coleon]

Re: Making Headlines - The Cruise EP Intro

You remind me of MPulse out of Chicago, just something about your voice. Your flow and melody is smooth as hell. This is mixed and mastered beautifully, I can tell you're not on some amateur shit. Keep it up bro.

[mykill]

Re: Making Headlines - The Cruise EP Intro

let me elaborate

Flow: A
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4/5, I'm thinking we're gonna see a bunch of freestyles/covers on this beat. Like Co' said, your flow is butter and your lyrics are pretty on point. Nice punches and good wordplay. Delivery is strong, very strong, and its one of your biggest assets as well as you having a great presence on the mic. Not much of any thing that I can say for you to improve on except keep doing what you do, and get some more promo out there and reach more ppl. Nice word Broc.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Making Headlines - The Cruise EP Intro

your vocals overpowering the beat , or the beat too low.

it sound like u put a compressor on the beat and vocals, did u do that when u mixed/mastered it??

FLOW - 5/5

LYRICS - 4.5/5

OVERALL - 4.5/5, NICE song, vocals to beat ratio sound off kinda, but still good.

[broc717]

Re: Making Headlines - The Cruise EP Intro

Nah I didn't compress the beats lowered cause I don't use pro tools and it hard if you don't have the complete wav file tracked out... I'm gonna play with it before I put the tape out, it should be out within a week and a video for the sifle Good Vibes will be out in a month I'm shooting it at school. Also if anyone, Which I doubt anyone will, but I
Tryin to assemble a small street team to help promote, don't have much incentive at the moment but god willin things will fall in place.

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Didn't compress it, the beat is lowered*** , Single** , I'm trying***

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Making Headlines - The Cruise EP Intro

Lyrics - I think your lyrics are the only thing holding you back.
Flow - Flow was on point.
Other - Your quality is great. I just wish your lyrics were a bit more complex.
Overall - 4/5.

[JSmooth]

Re: Making Headlines - The Cruise EP Intro

Flow- A/ flow was on point no complaints
Lyrics B+ had some lines that really stood out
overall- A- nice track. good choice for intro

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Making Headlines - The Cruise EP Intro

feedback:

soon as i heard the beat i was like smh, im so sick of this beat already, and this
song just came out.
everytime a new song by drake or wayne comes out, everyone on earth hops on the beat
or makes covers.
i dont even click on remixes of industry songs on youtube anymore, becuz i dont
wanna hear other people on the beat, i just wanna hear the original artist.
nowadays its too easy to get the instrumentals. at least a few years ago, it took a few
months before the instrumentals were released.
i dont know why everyone does it. maybe they just like the beat, or maybe
they wanna get views on their songs and they know people will click it becuz its
the new hot song out at the moment.
eh , whatever.
just do what u feel.
/rant

nice intro song. flow and lyrics was on point.
beat sounds low, but quality still good.


constructive criticism:

didnt agree wit some of the lyrics , but still delivered properly.

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i would appreciate if u could leave some feedback on my MIXING/MASTERING VOCAL QUALITY ON THE BEAT thanks here's the link

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ing-test2.html