VAiN - Bridges Burnt

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

STILL no mic but ever since i started recording again i can't really give it up.

this one is more of an R&B joint but there is still a verse and a small outro at the end.

i'm not a fan of the outro though and i'm probably gonna rerecord it or rewrite it in general.

Hulkshare.com Bridges Burnt.mp3

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...new-beats.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...r-16-bars.html

[Coleon]

Re: VAiN - Bridges Burnt

Hmmm I'm not a big R&B person so maybe I'm out of my depth on this one. I don't like how computerized the vocals sound with the singing. The more spoken word part is alright but a little too laid back. I think this would be pretty nice if I was actually into the genre. Keep it up.

P.S. Would you be interested in doing a chorus?

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: VAiN - Bridges Burnt

Hmmm I'm not a big R&B person so maybe I'm out of my depth on this one. I don't like how computerized the vocals sound with the singing. The more spoken word part is alright but a little too laid back. I think this would be pretty nice if I was actually into the genre. Keep it up.

P.S. Would you be interested in doing a chorus?

i'm always down to try anything. probably couldn't do it for a minute cause i'm savin up for a mic. (mine got busted up when i was movin)

but thanks also for the feedback. and yeah i realize most people here aren't really familiar with that genre. i just put it out anyway tho. i'm tired of writing. wanted to record even though i dont have a mic lol.

[mykill]

Re: VAiN - Bridges Burnt

Flow: B-
Lyrics: B+

Overall: 3.75/5, Singing isnt the best, but its not bad either. I need to get ready for work and stop giving people feedback lol. ANYWAY, I've always liked the Karaoke beat and you sound pretty good on it. I like the R&B tip. Some of the singing is still off key, even with Autotune. But the vibe of it all is pretty good man. You still sound pretty good without a decent mic too lol. The flow on the rap part sounds pretty good, nice and flawless. I'm really diggin' your stuff dude. Keep postin'.

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: VAiN - Bridges Burnt

yeah Karaoke beat is nice. i was kind of just experimenting with sounds with the autotune. don't really dig it much either but thank for the feedback! and yeah i'll try and keep posting.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: VAiN - Bridges Burnt

I dig it tbh. It does sound to computer-ish (If you get what I mean) but I can actually vibe to it. Get a mic!

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: VAiN - Bridges Burnt

I dig it tbh. It does sound to computer-ish (If you get what I mean) but I can actually vibe to it. Get a mic!

i know! i'm workin on it. mine got fucked up about 3 months ago when i moved apartments.



but thanks for the feedback.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: VAiN - Bridges Burnt

feedback:


nice beat

singin works and is bearable.

post how it sounds without autotune though , lol.

smooth ass song overall , and different than the usual stuff postede here.

definately have a unique swagg i suppose.

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: VAiN - Bridges Burnt

lol the beat i Karaoke but thanks. and you don't wanna hear it without autotune.

trust me. but thanks for the feedback!

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: VAiN - Bridges Burnt

and you don't wanna hear it without autotune.

trust me. but thanks for the feedback!

oh , but i do lol.

i used autotune before.

its funny to hear the difference between the autotuned vocals, vs. the non autotuned vocals.

---------- Post added at 08:01 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:36 PM ----------

i would appreciate if u could leave some feedback on my MIXING/MASTERING VOCAL QUALITY ON THE BEAT thanks here's the link

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ing-test2.html

[pgathriller]

Re: VAiN - Bridges Burnt

Sounds smooth, I like it; some of the notes don't sound quite right, not off, just sound like it would sound better if the vocal was pulled to a different note than the autotune is pulling it to. Just wondering, do you use the Auto or Graph setting? It would make sense if you use the Auto setting because I think autotune just pulls to the closest note while on the graph you can control which note. The problem with pulling to the closest note is sometimes that's not the best note, melodically, to go to (i.e. could be a minor 2nd or something else that doesn't really sound that great) it was cool though, I was able to listen to the whole thing without really hearing anything that was too far off for me to not want to listen to it

[JSmooth]

Re: VAiN - Bridges Burnt

Flow- B
Lyrics- B+
overall- B the singing was decent. obviously it would b better with a mic but you know that. the flow when rapping was nice but i when singing it wasnt as flawless. nice track though. keep it up


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