Noble - They Know

[THA GR8 M8]

Some new shit. They know....

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They don't understand, they ain't even fam
Back when I invisioned this, they didn't see the plan
Now we livin' so large, never weigh a blunt's worth
You be rollin' up grams, bitch we rollin' up more
So fuck yours, bitch I rep mine
The whole crew in this bitch, you know we steady makin' headlines
Snapback by my hairline, Polo on my chest
Bitch I ain't cocky, this is fuckin' confidence
See I'm faded off a couple of
Dank cigarillo's filled with icky shit, hash, let's roll another blunt, you fuckin' up
Didn't fuck with us, back when we were startin' out
Saw the grind, heard the tracks, you fuckers would just start to doubt
Ask me why I'm feelin' good, I just say I might be
All these hoes next to me, just really seem to like me
I be with the crew, THP, we ain't no hypebeasts
Out here settin' trends, now y'all tryna be a mic fiend
Because.... They Know...

See I really do it, I be makin' headlines
They ain't sleepin' on you, it ain't even past they bed time
Screamin' fuck the world, try to convict me of a sex crime
I'm just going hard, I ain't even gotta deadline
Self made, real shit, melt flames, kill this
All these bitches tryna lofe, I deny that bread mine
And, I don't think y'all get it
I be startin' where y'all finished, this is only the beginning
So fuck y'all, actually, I'm goin' harder then I have to be
On the mic, I just rap for free, do it like it's a salary
I don't think y'all get it, the real is on the rise
I told you it was coming, it shouldn't be a surprise
They Know.


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Feedback #2

[Coleon]

Re: Noble - They Know

I hated you end-rhyming worth with more. Maybe turn the beat up just a tad bit so the melody in your voice kind of blends with it. I felt like the headlines/sex crimes/bed times/sex crime scheme had so much potential for 2-4 solid punchlines but the multies were dope none the less. Flow on the outro was nice. Pretty decent drop. Any other time you have 2 verses I think a feature from someone would do it justice. Keep it up.

[ProBitaz.]

Re: Noble - They Know

Nice choice of beat.

Lyrics were great as always and there were only a few times I felt like the flow was a lil off.

Cool song 4/5

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - They Know

I hated you end-rhyming worth with more. Maybe turn the beat up just a tad bit so the melody in your voice kind of blends with it. I felt like the headlines/sex crimes/bed times/sex crime scheme had so much potential for 2-4 solid punchlines but the multies were dope none the less. Flow on the outro was nice. Pretty decent drop. Any other time you have 2 verses I think a feature from someone would do it justice. Keep it up.

What do mean "I hated you end-rhyming worth with more"? Sorry if thats a dumb question ha. I appreciate it. I was gunna spit another verse on it. But I didn't wanna use Drake's chorus again, and couldn't think of a good hook myself. So I just let the beat ride at the end. But I thank you for the listen and whatnot!

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Nice choice of beat.

Lyrics were great as always and there were only a few times I felt like the flow was a lil off.

Cool song 4/5

Thanks, I didn't really find any slips. But each person hears things differently. Appreciate the feedback.

[Coleon]

Re: Noble - They Know

Now we livin' so large, never weigh a blunt's worth
You be rollin' up grams, bitch we rollin' up more

When you transitioned from having the end rhyme "worth" to having the end rhyme "more". Sentus does this sometimes too. It's tricky to master making it sound fluent but your's was pretty close.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - They Know

When you transitioned from having the end rhyme "worth" to having the end rhyme "more". Sentus does this sometimes too. It's tricky to master making it sound fluent but your's was pretty close.

Oh yeah haha. I see what you mean. I thought it sounded nice and rhymed good.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Noble - They Know

I hated you end-rhyming worth with more. .

When you transitioned from having the end rhyme "worth" to having the end rhyme "more". Sentus does this sometimes too. It's tricky to master making it sound fluent but your's was pretty close.

its called "slant rhyming"

eminem a master at it, and wayne be killin it too.

[YoungTune.]

Re: Noble - They Know

dat cover doe


i'm just saying you can do better.

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: Noble - They Know

dat cover doe


i'm just saying you can do better.

you tryin to quote Drake or did you do that shit on accident?

and @THP you already know what i think. shit's dope. solid record bruh.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - They Know

its called "slant rhyming"

eminem a master at it, and wayne be killin it too.

Yeah I think its good when you can successfully do it. Alot better than rhyming the more simple words.

dat cover doe


i'm just saying you can do better.

Cover was only there just to have something on Bandcamp. I don't even care about the cover. Not sure why you commented on it?

you tryin to quote Drake or did you do that shit on accident?

and @THP you already know what i think. shit's dope. solid record bruh.

Thanks man. I wanna do some work with you in the future!

[MC_Crary]

Re: Noble - They Know

Your flow word this beat Well THP, minus a few slip up's. Mostly in the second verse, it was mostly the breath control though. Give up the ports man, I did, it helps lol. Your lyrics are always pretty dope, you developing better rhyme schemes now rather than just going for constant multis. Lately they've been coming out and staying on topic. Its always good to hear music from you man, needs to happen more often.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - They Know

Your flow word this beat Well THP, minus a few slip up's. Mostly in the second verse, it was mostly the breath control though. Give up the ports man, I did, it helps lol. Your lyrics are always pretty dope, you developing better rhyme schemes now rather than just going for constant multis. Lately they've been coming out and staying on topic. Its always good to hear music from you man, needs to happen more often.

Yeah I feel you. I'm working on breathe control though. I been doing 'fast flow' freestyles lately. Just to get better. I don't think my breathe control really effected me on this song. But like I said on a post earlier in the thread, every person see's things different. So, I'll still try to work on it. And I really wanna drop more music. I have like 5+ songs written. I just need time to record.. But I appreciate the feedback Crary!