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  • #13
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    First drop in a while and it's not bad. I felt like the mixing could have been better, it was hard to understand you at times. Flow was nice throughout, I don't think there were any slip-ups, but I do think that it didn't fit the beat at times and would sound a bit awkward. The lyrics are good as usually, but your rhyme schemes are lacking at times (I dislike the second verse). Drop more music mane!

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    • #14
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      Originally posted by Artille View Post
      First drop in a while and it's not bad. I felt like the mixing could have been better, it was hard to understand you at times. Flow was nice throughout, I don't think there were any slip-ups, but I do think that it didn't fit the beat at times and would sound a bit awkward. The lyrics are good as usually, but your rhyme schemes are lacking at times (I dislike the second verse). Drop more music mane!
      I could understand everything good, and I think the mixing is perfect; but eh. And yeah, I was wanting to do something different on the song, so I did some different flows throughout. All sounded nice to me though. And what's wrong with the rhyme schemes?



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      • #15
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        I like the beat a lot and the lyrics and flow is good too

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        • #16
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          Originally posted by YUNG DIEZEL View Post
          its called "slant rhyming"

          eminem a master at it, and wayne be killin it too.
          No, it's not a slant rhyme if you don't try to rhyme them. LOL fall back if you don't know what you're talking about.

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          • #17
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            Originally posted by jewazi View Post
            I like the beat a lot and the lyrics and flow is good too
            Thanks man!!!

            Originally posted by Coleon View Post
            No, it's not a slant rhyme if you don't try to rhyme them. LOL fall back if you don't know what you're talking about.
            I think you're actually right here Coleon, but let's not fill up my thread with arguments please lol.



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            • #18
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              Originally posted by Coleon View Post
              No, it's not a slant rhyme if you don't try to rhyme them. LOL fall back if you don't know what you're talking about.

              proof????

              otherwise im right.........

              it shouldnt matter if the rhyme was intentional or not , the slant rhyme product is still the same.
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              • #19
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                Originally posted by THP850 View Post
                Thanks man. I wanna do some work with you in the future!
                yeah man. definitely. just hit me up.

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                • #20
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                  Originally posted by YUNG DIEZEL View Post
                  proof????

                  otherwise im right.........

                  it shouldnt matter if the rhyme was intentional or not , the slant rhyme product is still the same.
                  Proof?

                  If I end one line with "rhino" and the next with "fire marshall" I'm switching schemes, not attempting a slant rhyme.

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                  • #21
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                    Originally posted by Coleon View Post
                    Proof?

                    If I end one line with "rhino" and the next with "fire marshall" I'm switching schemes, not attempting a slant rhyme.
                    same difference coley cole.

                    like said earlier....
                    although you're not attempting slant rhyme, its still the same outcome.

                    How to Use Slant Rhyme in Rap | eHow.com

                    Half rhyme - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

                    out of all people, i would of thought u woulda known this being the "hip hop" fan u are.

                    sentus even knows im right.
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                    • #22
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                      Flow - I didn't notice any slip us, but the "and I don't think ya'll get it" line sounded kinda awkward. I think because of the delivery or the emotion in it. Other than that, good shit. 4/5

                      Lyrics - Nice mulits, I like. The headlines, bed times, sex crimes, deadlines line was dope, but like Coleon said, you could've delivered some nice metaphors or similes, so you kinda missed that chance. There weren't a lot of spectacular lines in here, but overall, it was pretty good. Stuck to a topic and didn't bounce around all over the place. 4/5

                      Overall - 4/5


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                      • #23
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                        Lyrics- 3/5
                        Flow- 3/5

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                        • #24
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                          Slant rhyme - Making two words rhyme that traditionally don't rhyme.

                          He didn't make them rhyme.

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